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Fionordequester 21 Março
Bombero was saying:
Nah, in DBM canon this wouldn’t work. vegito / Buu I forgot which. Said that Magic doesn’t work on a fighter if they are thousands of times stronger than the magician. Broly would literally yell and then become immune to this.


That was an arrogant statement from Vegetto—someone who has been shown to lose to magic again and again throughout this comic. I wouldn't take his statement as fact.
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Fionordequester 20 Março
I actually like this set-up a lot. There's a lot of humor in the comic outright acknowledging just how dumb the Z-Warriors would've had to have been for Broly to have somehow defeated them, despite the infinite number of options available to them—it's right on brand for Salagir's sense of humor. I'm just interested in seeing how many methods they can come up with, besides Dabura's spit.


Paaah was saying:
Feels weird to see the spit work if Brolys aura normally just stops 99% of attacks barring carbonite in these comics XD

I figured even Buu transforming him wouldn't do anything with how it didn't effect Vegito or maybe get devilman in to explode the evil/vices in him! Then again if the bad ending needed to happen neither of those beams would work because they wanted to punch broly instead.


The way I take it is that Broly's invincibility works against anything that causes pain for even the tiniest nano-second. But, transmogrifying substances like the Carbonite or the Demon Spit don't activate any pain receptors as all—so the aura doesn't know to kick in.
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Fionordequester 1 Janeiro
Damian Qualshy was saying:
The mood in this comic is a roller coaster and it's not a good thing. It changes each page basically.

Like the king was this menacing figure and now he looks like Hercule. Nice SS4 Vegeta hair though, really like the design.


I'm inclined to agree. The same thing happened with Nasu (the girl selling apples)--the intensity of the artwork swings too wildly between serious and silly.

It might be intentional just to play with our expectations and keep us guessing, but... I feel like there are less clunky ways of doing that.
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Fionordequester 29 Dezembro
MaverickFox was saying:
They explained that the king maintains a constant state of Ikari Mode. Don't think he is infected so much as he is roused by the idea of a fight.


But his text is normal in pages 24-29. It's possible the italics are just to indicate he's in a dark mood, but...
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Fionordequester 29 Dezembro
He's infected. Look at how all the king's text is bolded and in italics, just like Cumber's text.
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Fionordequester 26 Novembro
Stealing Scorpion's catchphrase, are we? 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 24 Maio 2024
BreakAway was saying:
BUT that doesn't mean what's happening here is entirely impossible, what annoys me is every time DBM comes up with something like this, they never bother showing and building up to the parts that NOT explain why but rather SHOW why...

I'm not against the way Gohan is acting, I do think it's possible he had a bit of a phase where he needed something or someone like Baby Trunks to make him motivated again.

I just think it's a bit extreme because he would never give up on those still alive, His Mother, Bulma, his grandfather.


This is basically where I'm at. You can absolutely tell this story with Gohan; you just can't be so over-the-top about it.

Having Gohan just bluntly say "This just made me want to die" (in pretty much those exact words), without a hint of irony, isn't dramatic--it's comical.
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Fionordequester 24 Maio 2024
Meng_Shu was saying:

I'm sorry to hear that those terrible things happened to you. I'd rather not talk about myself, but I've had my share of trauma as well, I think we all have, no matter the extent.


Indeed, we all have. Thus, neither of us should think the either is speaking out of ignorance.

Meng_Shu was saying:
This is a story for Gohan, a journey that will eventually lead to him finding hope, which is a big theme in the Mirai timeline and throughout all of Dragon Ball.


How do you know that? Because all I know of this timeline is that the Androids win--that's it. Gohan could very well decide not to save Trunks & Bulma here; it could even be that one selfish decision is why the Androids win.

I hope that's not the case, but I can't presume anything.

Meng_Shu was saying:
This is also an early iteration of Gohan, he's not as strong as he will become later on. If he goes into battle right now, chances are that he's just going to get beaten up, and the people are going to die anyway. He's frustrated that all of his efforts are null. I don't understand why people can't grasp that concept. Frustration leads people to say and do things that are irrational in the moment. Dragon Ball Multiverse takes that idea to another level, it humanizes its characters, and that's a good thing, because it makes the story more interesting!


"Humanizing" and "changing" are very different words. I feel like Salagir accidentally did the latter--the Gohan I'm seeing feels a bit more like how, say, Present Trunks would react under these circumstance, for example.

Meng_Shu was saying:
And at the end of the day, even though he's a fictional character, he's just a freaking kid!! Like, even if it were an adult, I don't see why anyone would blame them! But this is a kid we're talking about, a kid who's lost everything at that. If this were Goku, I would 100% with all of you, but this is Gohan we're talking about, Mirai Gohan at that, who's been established to be way different from our own.


The big problem is the presentation. A nihilistic Gohan driven off the edge of despair is absolutely something that could be done...

...But not like this. Not in this exact way. He would not be saying these exact words, nor making these exact faces... And he especially would not refuse to rescue people, no matter how utterly outclassed he was.

Remember him saving Dende from Dodoria? Even though it meant exposing himself (and Krillen) to villains he had absolutely no chance of beating? That's who Gohan is.
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Fionordequester 24 Maio 2024
Meng_Shu was saying:
Okay like, guys, this is not out of character for Gohan at all.

Imagine, [all this terrible stuff]

IDK about you guys, but I'd be pretty pissed too.


Yes. YOU would be. You are your own person, and trauma affects different people differently.

But for me, I don't have to imagine overwhelming trauma--there was a time in my life where I was physically beaten up at least twice a week by multiple people, for 6 straight months in a row. THAT gave me PTSD for a good while afterward, even when it was finally over.

In addition, I know at least two people who've actively fought in the military (one in Vietnam, one in Afghanistan), and a brother who very nearly ruined his own life with his Alcoholism (he's better now)...

So as someone who has at least a decent grasp of what trauma does, and doesn't, do...

*This isn't Gohan with crippling despair.* This is a new character entirely.

Would the real Gohan have all these same thoughts? Sure... But this is not how he would express them. And even if he didn't fight the Androids directly, he'd still at least rescue who he could before flying off to safety (while trying not to be seen, of course).

Trauma affects you in a lot of very harmful, very undesirable ways, yes... It absolutely breaks you, when it's really bad--I will grant that much.

But it still doesn't change your base personality. It still doesn't warp your morals. You are who you are, period.

So this "what's the point of trying to help?" Gohan we're seeing here? No. That's a step too far, even given the circumstances. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 23 Maio 2024
Salagir was saying:
No. Not at all. All the other z-fighters made one fight, maybe several over a few days, and died. The end.

For several years...

What i don't understand, is that, right above: comparing the dread of years of future timeline to the usual fights of DB, with DBs in the pockets, as several comments pointed out.

Considering that Gohan being depressed is totally out of characters and even hating him for this... I just don't understand how you think.


Wait, what? What do you mean "several years"?

According to this very special, he had one fight with them, then "spent months healing from his injuries before training, hiding from the world".

https://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-2334.html

Where are these countless fights Gohan supposedly had? As of this page? Because whenever they were, they weren't presented to us.

EDIT: Unless you just mean "things have been bad for years", and not "Gohan has literally TRIED to save people and beat them" for several years". If you only mean the first one... Then no, that wouldn't change Gohan to the extent we see here.

Trust me, I've had times in my life where I genuinely had no hope of ever being happy again--I would know.
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Fionordequester 23 Maio 2024
Just Saiyan was saying:
I honestly think Bra would be motivated and angry. Gohan just misses his family and doesn't care for fighting. He never has been the type to care a lot about his strength where Bra is obsessed with how strong she is.


Fair point. Bra was a lot more obsessed with strength, and had significantly more confidence in her abilities--so quite a bit would change.

Still, this isn't the way Gohan would express his hopelessness and despair. He'd have all the same thoughts he's expressed in the last two pages, yes... But he'd be more like a beaten puppy about it, not the flippant jerk we see here. For example:

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1) With Baba, he wouldn't be angrily demanding she'd turn the orb back on--he'd be desperately pleading.

2) With his suicidal thoughts, he'd never just say "This just makes me want to die"--he'd still care enough about Roshi to not put that thought in his head.. He'd more just have this really shell-shocked and vacant look on his face as he screams something like "No, there is no hope! They're dead! They're ALL dead, and always WILL BE!" (or something equally melodramatic).

3) It's believable he'd refuse to fight the Androids... But he'd act more like he did against Nappa. He'd have this mix of haunting guilt (for refusing to help people in need), overwhelming fear (because he's afraid of the Androids, and knows how helpless he is against them), and crippling insecurity (because he feels completely worthless).

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Honestly, an accurately written Gohan (assuming we're going with the "soul crushing despair" route) would be even sadder and more depressing than what we're getting here... Which just makes me question the wisdom of even doing this Special to start with.
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Fionordequester 23 Maio 2024
Alright, serious question: Is Salagir writing for Gohan here? Or is he writing for U16 Bra (pre-Majin Arc)?

Copy and paste her over Gohan in these panels, and tell me how she would act differently (assuming she was as weak as Gohan). Tell me she wouldn't make this exact facial expression. Tell me she wouldn't have been just as snarky & dismissive. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 22 Maio 2024
WukongTheMighty was saying:
Oh yeah that's probably at the top, especially because when that page released wasn't Broly like, completely irrelevant to the story?
Then again, it's not like the future is relevant at this point either. I'd really think it was cool if one of the timelines we had was one where Future Gohan survived or something, then all of this wouldn't be wasted character development on a corpse.


Agreed. Taking the Dragon Ball "what-if" route (like a lot of the DB games did) would be really cool—it'd help with the whole "foregone conclusion" problem, too.
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Fionordequester 21 Maio 2024
WukongTheMighty was saying:
Wasn't expecting that we'd get a new contender for the worst page in all of DBM with this special, but here we are, so let's go over a few things.


Honestly? As bad as this is, I still think the ending of the 3rd Broly special takes the cake. I mean, we get the previous three pages showing him get sucked into a massive Black Hole, with the first page even going out of its way to talk about how massively OP a black hole is:

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And then our explanation for how Broly somehow survived in U20? Despite this working in literally every other universe (as it should)?

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I genuinely felt like I was being trolled, it was that stupid. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 12 Fevereiro 2024
Teleported_Bread was saying:
Why are so many people assuming Bojack is straight-up stupid?


Bujin himself calls him that in Page 1964: https://w...964.html#h_read

But at any rate, his actions speak for themselves. He kills his own minions for merely suggesting ideas, he openly laughs about not caring for anyone but himself, yet is somehow surprised that Bujin would betray him...

If he's got intelligence, we certainly don't see him use it
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Fionordequester 2 Dezembro 2021
ZFQFMIB was saying:
ChrisOfChaos was saying: So even though Bujin helped them they still intended to kill him? I'm liking these girls progressively less and less. At least Goku gave villains a chance to live if they stopped causing trouble.

There's a few issues here though. Firstly, if they misjudge they're screwed...

Secondly, while WE know he's an alright guy, but they sure as hell don't...

Thirdly, Bojack slaughtered their people. If your defense at the Nuremberg trials was 'Sure he's a leader of the Nazi party.. but he's reforming!' I doubt you'd get very far...


The main problem with this argument is that the girls were proclaiming themselves executers of justice mere moments ago. It's a bit hypocritical to make speeches like that, then turn around and backstab the guu that helped them (regardless of his reason).

If you're gonna call yourself a hero of justice, then you need to ACT like one--even when it's risky to do so.

Secondly, the dude literally put his neck on the line for them--even though he knew his powers were diminished (as evidenced by his lack of surprise).

That's going a little far for someone who's just putting on a mask, don't you think? It's probably what made Syd think twice. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 18 Novembro 2021
MultiKoopa was saying:
I feel like they're not gonna let Buujin off the hook for having been on Bojack's side all this time."


Why not? The only reason they're even alive right now is because he chose to keep their secret. He could've ratted them out at any time.

If you're not gonna spare your enemy even then, what motive do they have to help you?
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Fionordequester 13 Novembro 2021
Frango was saying:
[W]hy don’t they also lower Bujin’s power and kill him too? Bujin might’ve joined them, but he’s still a selfish mass murderer. Even if they drain Bujin’s power and lose against Bojack, Bojack would still kill (or at least try to) Bujin.


1) You don't kill an enemy that's already thrown down their sword--especially one that did so without any threat needed. It'd be a horrible thing to do--plus it would make future enemies fight to the death. Said enemies would also have the perfect justification for being equally cruel.

2) He could have ruined their plans any time he wanted--but he didn't. He's clearly loyal--plus they're indebted to him.

3) He clearly cares about his friends, offering Zangya a chance the way he did. Whatever he's done in the past, he's at least capable of empathy.

4) Disregarding all of the above, he was not the one who torched their homes--Bojack was. Whatever evil he's done, we don't know how much was self-motivated, and how much was on Bojack's orders.
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Fionordequester 23 Outubro 2021
There's a few corrections I'd like to make:

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It looks like Berizzo forgot the inking on Jet & May's mustaches, so I took the liberty of filling those in. Also added a bit of volume to Kat's soul patch, and lengthened his and Kat's mustaches.

Not to say I'm better than Berizzo or anything (trust me, I'm not)--just saw some room for tweaking, that's all.
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Fionordequester 27 Agosto 2021
عمار was saying:
...Listen, this argument is not me vs you. It's you vs Salagir.


That'd be more convincing if Salagir's statements were reliable. Unfortunately, they are not. For example, "Broly is not stronger than a black hole"...until suddenly, he was.

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Fionordequester 7 Janeiro 2021
Argelios was saying:
And so, this arc is over.
I feel disappointed in the conclusion, so I edited the last 3 pages a little bit to give you an alternative take on it.



And then you would have Bra as a character who has accepted death but would be proven wrong later in the story when she has to protect U16 against Vegetto and XXI.


Thank you, Argelios. That is absolutely something I could have accepted. Significantly less ham-fisted, and Bra actually owns her crimes. That's really all we ever wanted.
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Fionordequester 5 Janeiro 2021
ComboFreak was saying:
I'm not an arguer, I'm not like that... Peace out, I've written the thesis I said I didn't want.


Are you saying you would like to be left alone? I have answers to all that, but I also want to respect your wishes. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 5 Janeiro 2021
I don't have any new arguments to present, this page: Instead, I'll share my personal feelings.

I've followed, and loved, this series for a long time. It wasn't perfect, but the main artwork was generally fantastic, and the side artwork was almost always at least interesting.

I didn't use to mind Bra so much either. Actually, I liked her, for about the first 300 pages! She was feisty in a positive way, she seemed like a hard worker, she clearly admired her father, she had emotions apart from "misery" and "anger"... She even smiled on occasion!

Not just the "You're gonna get knocked the FUNK out!" kind of smirks or smiles, either. I mean, actual, genuine smiles...

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But... Then Page 309 happened—the day Salagir decided Vegetto was no longer a white man...

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And immediately after, the very first time they show up (Page 315), the Bras are meaner than they are before:

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Bra insults her family for the first time (Page 321):

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Bra gives her first murderous grin (Page 363):

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Bra kills someone for the first time (Page 368):

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And on it goes. In addition, she almost never smiles again, even after 1500+ more pages. There's ONE time where she shows genuine happiness, when Pan is revived (Page 958):

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And a few one-off occasions when she's 6 years old, in the Chapter 54 special (Pages 1224-1244):

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But apart from that, post-309 Bra can be boiled down to four basic emotions...

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1) A gloomy scowl

2) Mocking glee at someone's suffering

3) Outrage at someone else's stupidity

4) Joy in laying a beating on some poor fool
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There was a new Bra in town, because Salagir decided he wanted a darker, edgier story... Which was fine. I enjoyed watching Vegeta gradually evolve, and thought Salagir would guide her to a similar place of self-reflection and self-actualization. So, I defended her and Salagir as I saw fit, and waited...

...and waited... and waited... and waited... and waited. I watched Bra win every match, use Senzu Beans without any hint of shame, watched her abuse her family without anyone fighting back, and watched the Ginyu sub-plot resolve itself in the span of a few minutes. Bra was protected from all consequences, and I was left stunned...

But that was ok, I thought. She came back as Majin Bra! NOW was when she was going to have her world view challenged, at long last! Gohan and the others would resist her with the power of teamwork! Gohan and the others would talk her down the same way Goku talked down Vegeta! It'd be like a long therapy session, just like that fight! Eventually, Bra's love for her family would prompt her to resist Babidi, just like Vegeta...

...And then she slew them all. She read the script and stopped attacks she couldn't possibly have known about. Cell's reinforced nucleus, Phipil's carbonite attack on her boot, people teleporting to places she could only have guessed at...

Then she cuts Gohan in half, and powers right through. Even Gohan's surprised:

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Oh, she breaks the spell, sure... After someone calls her "passive":

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And now, instead of fixing her character, Salagir wants to blame everything on Vegetto: A quick & dirty way of getting us back on her side, without actually having to put too much work into it.

I won't presume to know what Salagir's thinking... But it seems to me he wanted a "morally grey" character—and "morally grey", in his mind, meant "this character is always 100% gloomy and mean, all the time, and verbally abuses everyone all the time". Now he's written himself into a corner, and is trying to save her the only way he knows how—making Vegetto even meaner, in comparison.

Know this: You're not talking to a "hater" when you talk to me. You're talking to 10 years of subverted expectations. A person who saw how she used to be written, saw how Salagir changed her, and has realized that she's probably not going to be getting any better. 3 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 3 Janeiro 2021
DarkClaw was saying:
1, 2, & 4. Why is Bra unique, you ask? That's a question for the author, not me - you just have to accept that it's a fact in this comic.


Or I could drop the comic altogether. I know people who have... Perhaps I might join them.

DarkClaw was saying:
3. That Vegetto's control issues don't bother you is a different point altogether from them existing.


Every person has issues; Everyone. What matters is whether they act on them, which Vegetto almost never has.

DarkClaw was saying:
5. Again - that she wasn't able to master it in her 16 years is just a creative decision of the author that you have to live with.


That's not the issue. The issue is that story seems to think that most of Bra's issues are not her fault; That most of them are Vegetto's fault. That's absurd, given how Vegetto used to be characterized, and based on what Bra's done and why.

DarkClaw was saying:
Honestly, I don't think I can add anything else to our conversation - I feel like I'm mostly trying to convince you that the events in the comic have actually taken place lol. Enjoy the rest of it, cheers


Sure. God bless you, friend :) .
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Fionordequester 3 Janeiro 2021
DarkClaw was saying:
1. Gotta be honest dude - I can't reply to your comment seriously.


Yes you can. You always have that choice... And I always serious when I reply to you.

DarkClaw was saying:
You're going on about how SS1 doesn't make you lose control, but those entire 2 chapters are literally all about Bra learning to not lose control while in SS1... If you can't understand that, then nothing I write will help you more than you re-reading those 2 chapters. It's just a fact in this comic.


And why is that unique to Bra?

SS1 Doesn't cause problems to anyone else; Not Pan, not not Gotenks, not Vegetto, not even Broly or U4 Vegeta. There is no reason Bra should have any problems with it.

DarkClaw was saying:
2. Umm... I'm not mad at Vegetto lol. Vegetto is not doing something good right now. He's willingly trying to murder his daughter - that's far worse than anything Bra has willingly done.


Bra was coherent enough in SS1 to be held responsible. At best, you could liken her to a drunk driver under the influence. You can't excuse a drunk driver for running someone over, even if it wasn't fully intentional.

DarkClaw was saying:
3. No, Vegetto didn't control his feelings. He had to teleport away and have a temper tantrum - that's not control. Control is what Goku and Vegeta are doing. Just because he didn't take it out on someone until now doesn't mean he was in control. If someone's at home wailing on a pillow, it doesn't mean they're in control of their anger XD


Different people have different ways of handling their emotions. So long as you're not hurting anyone, I don't give a toss.

DarkClaw was saying:
Anakin willingly and consciously murdered innocent children, among others. Bra has never willingly killed anyone - she's either been in a beserker-trance and had no memory of what she did (like Gohan when he attacked Raditz), or was literally under someone's control (namely, Babidi's). There's no comparison between Anakin and Bra.


I'm not calling her SS1 a "berserker-trance". Even Goten, Kid Trunks, and Pan managed it without issue.

This'd be like if a kid misbehaved, and tried to blame it on sugar and caffeine.

DarkClaw was saying:
By the way, I'm not saying Bra is completely innocent - she's not. She has a responsibility to learn to control her powers. But, again - she's never willingly killed anyone (that we know of).


She's had 16 years to learn control, under the best set of teachers a person could possibly have. Namekians, Kais, Buddhist monks... Yet, she's still evil enough to be Majinized. Plus, Vegetto has had to regular stop her rampages, "for years"...

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This, along with the fact that insults were what made her break Babidi's control; Not bisecting her own brother.

Toriyama never tried to defend Vegeta; Salagir is more than happy to defend Bra. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 3 Janeiro 2021
Super Gojita 3 was saying:
Disregard unless you want to have a legit conversation.


I always do.

Regarding Vegeta, and going back to my Star Wars example, he's sort of like Darth Vader was, in the end. He did not suffer the full weight of what he deserved, but he still suffered enough consequences, and significant enough hardship, that I don't feel too bad about him ending up in a good place.

Bra, right now, is like if I were watching Revenge of the Sith, and Yoda had shut off Obi-Wan's lightsaber right as he were about to kill Anakin.

Yoda was saying:
"More faith in your apprentice, you should have, Obi-Wan. Seduced by Palpatine, and the Dark Side of the Force, he was. The Dark Side changes you; You cannot be judged by what you do when affected by the Dark Side. Murder your adopted son, you should not".


Padme comes in after having been choked...

Padme was saying:
"Don't you see? Anakin is sorry! He's calm now. He has complete control over himself!"


Mace Windu comes in, charred from head-to-toe, and lays this verbal beatdown:

Mace Windu was saying:
You have failed him as a father, and as a master. You KNOW he's always had self-control problems, yet have been impatient and frustrated. You have not given him the praise he needs, nor have you relied on others as you should have...


That's what these last few pages have been like, for me.
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Fionordequester 3 Janeiro 2021
chstar was saying:
Albeit it's unnecessary given Bra's sins are nowhere near as bad as Vegeta's. The point you keep missing.


Vegeta paid for his crimes; Bra didn't. The point you keep missing.

dude was saying:
Wouldn't her sins be worse because she was supposed to be good from the start? While Vegeta was just being a bad guy because that's just how he came up?


Exactly. This is part of why you can't argue hypocrisy on the part of folks who like Vegeta, but hate Bra.

DarkClaw was saying:
1. That entire chapter is about how Bra didn't have control of SS1 at the time...


SSJ1 doesn't do anything but make you more "restless". Vegeta, Gohan, Goten, & Kid Trunks? No difference whatsoever. Namek!Goku changed very briefly when his best friend was murdered... Then he spared the murderer anyway. Even Broly was still sane when he went regular SSJ...

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U18 Pan didn't act any differently either, during her first transformation:

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Child Bra did not have a "murderous rampage" problem in her SSJ forms. Child Bra had a "murderous rampage" problem, period. SSJ2 and Majinization only made more obvious.

Current!Bra is a little better... But not enough to break the Majinization after slaying both Piccolos & Gohans.[/quote]

DarkClaw was saying:
2. Bra wasn't revelling in killing Goten, she was revelling in reaching SS2. At worst, she was indifferent to killing Goten - and if so, she'd hardly be the first character to be indifferent about death because of the dragonballs existing (even Bulma has been shown to be).


So why get mad at Vegetto, if we're going by that logic? He has the Dragon Balls. Killing Bra's just a short time-out, right? Bring her back once she's meditated in the after-life?

DarkClaw was saying:
3. Vegetto has definitely not been stable throughout this comic... We've seen that he has trouble controlling his emotions...


But he DID control them. He had toxic thoughts on occasion, dealt with them, then live his life without hurting anyone... Like adults do.

Until now, of course. Now he needs to look bad so Bra looks better by comparison.

DarkClaw was saying:
4. If that's your opinion, sure - I just don't share it.


Fair enough.

Still, I don't like this at all. It'd be like if I were watching Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith, and everyone was lecturing Obi-Wan for not having more faith in Anakin Skywalker... After he just slaughtered a room full of children. "He was being manipulated by Palpatine, Obi-Wan!" "The Jedi were too strict on him growing up!" "Don't you see he feels bad, Obi-Wan? That he's calm now?" "You should've had more faith in him, Obi-Wan!"...

...Can you honestly tell me you would defend Anakin the same way you defend Bra, if that were to happen? 3 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 3 Janeiro 2021
DarkClaw was saying:
1 & 2. Because she's not a villain. Anyone she's ever killed, she killed by accident.


She would've knowingly slain everyone on Earth here, if Gohan hadn't stopped her. You can't blame SS2 for this one:

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And accidental or not, she clearly doesn't care as much as you and I do:

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Heck, she didn't even care as much as Naurb did: A fellow Majin:

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DarkClaw was saying:
Vegeta has murdered many and enjoyed doing it.


So did Bra:

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DarkClaw was saying:
3. Bra was raised by an unstable person, and that rubbed off on her. Compare her to her U18 counterpart who was raised by stable people. Besides - being raised by nice people doesn't automatically mean you're not going to have problems. Good people can still create spoiled monsters.


Vegetto has been stable and sane since the comic began. He had one freak out when he got DQed, and had one impulse towards breaking Gohan's skull... An impulse he then dealt with in a mature, responsible way.

Thoughts don't make you a monster; Actions do.

DarkClaw was saying:
4. A few things here
— Being the poster character for a series doesn't automatically make them a nice person


It makes them an important character, though. More important than Vegeta was to Toriyama.

DarkClaw was saying:
— We don't know that she's Salagir's favourite character
— Even if she is Salagir's favourite character, that also doesn't make her a nice person


It makes her a character he's biased towards. He wants us sold on her character, even if he needs to make previously good characters look bad to do it. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 3 Janeiro 2021
chstar was saying:
It's not even comparable. Some of you clearly dislike Bra for reasons other than what your claiming. Otherwise you'd hate Vegeta all the more...


1) Toriyama treated Vegeta like a bad guy; Salagir does not treat Bra like one.

2) Vegeta was repeatedly broken and humiliated; But Bra is only NOW facing serious consequences for anything she's done.

3) Vegeta was raised by evil people; Bra was raised by good people

4) Vegeta was Toriyama's least favorite character:

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But Bra is Salagir's favorite character, and it shows:

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Fionordequester 3 Janeiro 2021
SpaceOink was saying:
I think people taking this a little bit harder than they should.
I mean... Even TFS made a joke about people constantly dying till Krillin says.... "Hey... Dragon balls".


Valeros was saying:
Forgiving Bra isn’t that strange when they forgave Vegeta for killing hundreds when he was taken over by Babadi. And don’t give me any of that “She killed Gohan!” when this is still called Dragon Ball. Death is a vacation.


Cool. So why not let Vegetto kill her? It's just a small time-out, after all, right?

That logic goes both ways, is what I'm saying.
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Fionordequester 31 Dezembro 2020
Memati was saying:
And what is up with the dozens of comments overly criticizing the translation? Could you guys be any more nitpicky?


Because it'd be better if Salagir listened to his own translators:

https://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-1257.html

Salagir was saying:
@Meister Kleister : FYI, based on some of the other translations, what Vegetto said in the last panel might better be translated to something like: "Even my little Bra can't reach a tenth of my level. No one in any universe can."

This error it my full choice (it may not be a good one, but it's on purpose and not the fault of the english translators ^^).

Here is the discussion that happened between me and my proodreaders:
(Context: He changes "can" to "is" and I say no.)
npberryhill:
This sentence is incomplete. No one in any universe can... can what? That's why I changed it to "is" previously. But I think it can be fixed by changing the previous sentence slightly so it's a direct response the way I think you want. "Even my little Bra can't come close to a tenth of my level." That would make the second sentence work fine I think.
Salagir:
The french version contains the same "error".
The 2 sentences don't fit perfectly with each others: Yes. It's talk. He doesn't prepare his text in advance... It doesn't need to be all calculated and perfectly fitting.
He modify his "argumentation" over time. First, he says she is not strong enough. Then, he adds that well, no one can be that strong enough anyway.
npberryhill:
Okay, cool. I agree we should strive to be as close to the original as possible. Well, if I can, let me suggest we add one word to the end of the second sentence then? "No one in any universe can be." It's small, I don't think it changes meaning, only fixes.
(I still refused, cause i'm a troll)
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Fionordequester 30 Dezembro 2020
Ashanark was saying:
@Fionordequester
Good post. Short but sweet. Those minicomics are very telling.


When debates drag on, it's easy to lose track of what's important. Hence, my writing always fits on a post-it-note :) .
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Fionordequester 30 Dezembro 2020
Duzzpartner was saying:
Watch as this thread turns into "Mary Sue! Obvious favorite! No sympathy! Let her die!" and then people pretending ignoring that they're favorite Vegeta did much worse than Bra in his life and none of them want him dead. Hmmm, I wonder what the main difference between Vegeta and Bra is? Why would people excuse Vegeta but not Bra, the 16-year old teenage girl?


1) The story treated Vegeta like a bad guy (Toriyama himself said he was his least favorite character)...

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...while Bra is the face of DBM; She is to Salagir what Goku was to Toriyama:

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2) Vegeta was repeatedly broken and humiliated; But Bra is only NOW facing serious consequences for anything she's done. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 30 Dezembro 2020
SAFI794 was saying:
Fionordequester was saying: ...You wanted his control, so that's why you never obeyed him...? Huh?

Referring to when vegeta (one half of vegito) purposefully came under the control of babidi to surpass Goku in the Buu Arc as Majin Vegeta.


Ok, but the grammar communicates two different ideas. Wanting someone's control suggests you'd want to obey them, not that you'd NEVER obey them.
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Fionordequester 30 Dezembro 2020
...You wanted his control, so that's why you never obeyed him...? Huh?

Also making a lot of assumptions as to whether or not she was brainwashed by surprise. Gotenks didn't read the script, did he? 2 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 21 Dezembro 2020
...This doesn't even feel like a story anymore. It's more like one of those gags, where different characters tell completely different versions of the same event. We're gonna cut to the two in a therapist's office, with Bra having just told her version of the story; Then Vegetto's gonna tell his OWN hilariously ham-fisted version, where he's the perfect parent, and Bra is the Devil-incarnate.

Except, we're supposed to take this seriously...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lpGbTFLXxVE (Uncle Phil's Version)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xiAND6739kM (Will's Version)
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Fionordequester 20 Dezembro 2020
fda92 was saying:
P.S: I'd also question the usage of the word retcon. You can't "retcon" something that's not even been firmly established, and while the narrative is still unraveling. Unless we also want to think Dragon Ball was a giant, constant retcon, given the existence of an author constantly writing off the edge of his seat...


I mean, how else do you explain all her interactions with Vegetto since the comic began? She treats him the same way Pan treated Goku, in Dragon Ball GT. That's the point of the image I provided. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 20 Dezembro 2020
I'd feel much more emotional, were this not an obvious retcon of Vegetto's character:

https://i.postimg.cc/FhJkjcGR/Fear.png

Salagir's trying to manipulate you. You should demand better. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 18 Junho 2020
From the U16 Novel, Chapter 17

Note that the following isn't exactly what Salagir wrote. I tweaked the English translation of it so that it would sound better in English. Translation is only half the job of adapting something, after all; localization is an important step, too.

Fionordequester was saying:
Vegetto found the location of the new planet Namek. He went to Mori, the leader of what were probably the wisest people in the universe. The old Namekian drank only water, but still had tea ready for Vegetto. The two went inside before speaking, so as to avoid gossip from eavesdroppers. They spoke about the farmers of Last Hope for a time, then got to the heart of the matter.

“What would be the trouble of having one more child?” Mori asked.

“It's dangerous.” said Vegetto.

"But you said your other sons can already destroy planets by the thousands. How would this child be different?

“I can easily stop my other children. But a son I brought into the world myself... Saiyan children usually overpower their parents; Especially in my family.”

“So, what you actually fear is this: That your child could lose control, destroy the universe, and you couldn't do anything about it.”

“Yes.”

“But why would your son do such a thing? Do you fear his adolescence so much?"

“Well... First of all, Saiyans are violent; it's in their nature. They were like that even before Freeza... If you were to compare a normal Saiyan with any other race in the universe, you'd find him very cruel indeed. A rabid dog, were no one to hold him back.”

“But not your children.”

“Not Goku & Vegeta's children."

“But isn't one's upbringing more important than genetics? Gokû and Piccolo Daimao are convincing examples.”

“Maybe... But maybe we were lucky.”

“Hm...”

The Namekian was thinking... Trying to look at the problem from the right perspective. Education wasn't the problem, no, it was something else. Why did Vegetto foresee a dark future? Gokû was happy as could be, and even Vegeta wasn't this cynical... Vegetto's attitude was strange. The Kaioshins hadn't hammered responsibility that hard into his head. It seemed odd for such a powerful warrior to be this impressionable.

“Why would your child destroy the universe? Even saiyans don't destroy planets for the fun of it. Besides, ruling the universe is quite meaningless...”

“There were people who wanted to do it...”

“People... like you?”

Mori had found it.

“I thought about it.”

“Why?”

“I'm bored. I'll never find someone to challenge me. At times, I just want to leave everything. To mess around... But I won't."

“That thought only crossed your mind. You don't have to worry about your future.”

“Of course. I like my family, I'm sane, I'm calm... I would never be a threat.”

“But if that idea were to cross your son's mind..."

“Exactly. If I'm thinking it, it's possible he will too.”

“If you can control yourself, why couldn't he?”

“I had impulses. And some of them almost destroyed the universe. Vegeta is to blame for Perfect Cell creation, as well as Buu's resurrection... And when we go super saiyan, we are closer to our primal state... Strange ideas cross our mind... Especially when we do it for the first time. I'm very powerful, but I'm old too. I was born with 60 years of experience and good morals. When my son becomes super saiyan, he'd be less prepared. The peaceful Gokû became violent when he turned super saiyan, and so did Vegeta. He would've destroyed Freeza's entire empire; His rival and the cyborgs just happened to be higher priorities. With MY strength, however, they could have destroyed the planet just by pure accident."

“Once again, you were pure Saiyans. Your three sons hadn't shown such symptoms when they became super saiyans.”

“True, but Super Saiyan 2 could do it. Gohan completely changed during his first time.”

The chief of the Namekians fell silent again to think and to get in thoughts in order.

“You're just giving excuses.”

“I'm sorry?”

“Even if your offspring were to lose his mind, he'd remain your son. And he'd remain less powerful than you for a long while... You'd make him see reason. Your son isn't the problem; You are.”

“But I just told you that...”

“... that you can control yourself. But you fear that someday, you'll fail. There's a dark side in you, and you're afraid. You think your son will have it too.”

“I'm the problem?”

“Much more than your son would be. Maybe your son will have to bring you to heel.”

“...”

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Fionordequester 2 Maio 2020
SupremeFusionGogito was saying:
Literally who thought this shitshow of a battle was a good idea.



I do! 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 1 Maio 2020
DrewSaga was saying:
misi was saying: Fionordequester was saying: So the problem isn't that it's too gory, the problem is that something awful is happening to someone you like. Is that about the sum of it?

Not even close. The problem is that it sticks out like a sour thumb because you wouldn't see it in DB or DBZ. Doesn't matter if it's Piccolo, Gohan, Goku, Vegeta, Trunks... heck, or Chichi.


Asura draws the blood spatter a little more realistically. That's about the only difference I see between his work, and Toriyama's.

We can agree to disagree, I hope? 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 30 Abril 2020
misi was saying:
عمار was saying: misi was saying: really, I dare anyone to show me the scenes with Vegeta's exploding intestines, or Goku's ribcage being torn out. It's just not how Dbz did things. And because of that, of course it sticks out to some of us. It's not about us not being able to take it - who cares, it's just a fanmanga.
Not exactly Goku or Vegeta (or Gohan, or Piccolo) being mushed up, is it? Do we really have to go into the difference between a monster creature that grew out of the ground (Saibaman) or a 100% robot character who we only seen in that particular saga and seeing the insides being blown up of a main character? It's not that complex. Bottom line is: DB or DBZ would never show Gohan or Piccolo like that. Simple as.


So the problem isn't that it's too gory, the problem is that something awful is happening to someone you like. Is that about the sum of it? 2 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 24 Fevereiro 2020
Aegeus was saying:
I wish the reveal was a bit more subtle than this, but ok


I think when something's THIS hotly debated, you kind of have to be direct in how you answer it.

There's at least one guy here that's STILL digging in his heels. Just imagine how many more there'd be if they hadn't answered it so bluntly.
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Fionordequester 14 Fevereiro 2020
King 4 was saying:

For kids who are bra, yes you do. Might makes power. Power makes control.


And what happens when Vegito gets old? When his skin sags? When his teeth rot, and his legs buckle, and his eyes go blind? Heck, what happens if he dies? From a heart virus, or something like that?
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Fionordequester 8 Fevereiro 2020
Ah, cool! Asura showed up to help clarify a few things:

Asura was saying:
Well there is obviously something missing (box or drawing) to better present the action of this page since most people have not understood it.

I thought that the box 1 would be enough to make understand the position of Bra compared to the other characters (roughly between the 2 groups but at a certain distance).
In box 2, Bra does the same tactic as against Cold, she begins her attack and teleports. Box 3 just shows where it starts to reappear.


@Asura
Thanks, Asura!
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Fionordequester 7 Fevereiro 2020
Btw: There's only 1 Senzu Bean left. 3 were consumed by the Gohans, and now Bra ate 2.

Regardless of what happens, this fight is almost over. She's not getting the full boost from just one bean.
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Fionordequester 7 Fevereiro 2020
@Asura
Man, Bra's expressions really are amazing.

Prediction: Bra is teleporting behind him. Gohan will either do that Substitution Jutsu thing, or die horribly.
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Fionordequester 6 Fevereiro 2020
kkk was saying:
Shabby was saying:
Son Bra needs two senzus to heal. That's why she eats two here. It's not because Piccolo has two senzus.
https://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-280.html


What you're saying is that she might have stolen 3 beans, and has just stored the last one? 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 6 Fevereiro 2020
Matrixkid was saying:
@Fionordequester

While I agree that she hasn't shown any kinder or humbler traits yet, I think she'll become kinder either after this, or at least closer to the end of the tournament. However she'll still be a bit of an ass because that's just the kind of personality she has.


At the pace this comic is going, that's looking to be a very long wait. It's been more than a decade, after all.

Do you think the audience will have that sort of patience?

Matrixkid was saying:
As for her facing consequences, I don't see it as a problem if she doesn't. Besides, everything that's happened so far doesn't warrent any more punishment than she's already gotten...


1) She was told to spare Zangya, and failed. This lack of self-control is precisely what led her to fall under Babidi's spell to start with. And now, at least two innocent people have died by her own hand, and it's likely more will join them.

2) She made a promise to the Heliotes that she would save their universe... and then proceeds to risk it all on a foolish bet with Cold. There would NOT have been any salvation for the Heliotes if she had lost; the Dragon Balls would only have revived and saved those present at the tournament.

It's not quite as bad as what happens with Goku & the Universal Survival arc, but, it's definitely up there. There should absolutely be consequences for gambling with people's lives that way.

Matrixkid was saying:
Even in this fight here, I don't see any consequences that need to be applied to any flaws. She got tainted by Babidi and is doing this half against her free will...


Babidi's spell isn't a mind eraser; It's a test of character. It can be resisted by those who are righteous, or those with enough mental fortitude (Cell & Vegeta).

Evidently, Bra is neither. Unfortunately, only half unwilling to kill innocent people is a pretty low bar.

Matrixkid was saying:
If anything, and I realise I'll get a lot of hate for this, I'm hating and rooting against Goku. Every time, without fail, in DB, DBZ, DBS, and DBM, Goku always wins against an opponent (Eventually).


That's... not actually true. Goku loses to Raditz, loses twice to Vegeta, needs outside interference against Ginyu & Freeza, loses to Android #19, loses to Cell, and fails to kill Buu on every occasion.

His win-loss record is actually pretty bad. And, many times, his losses were entirely avoidable. He's too naive with Raditz, he's careless in not taking his Heart Medicine in advance, and he shows extremely poor planning against Buu.

But, even if what you said is true... Goku is actually likable. He's kind, he's humble, he's open-minded, he's determined, he has remarkable mental fortitude, he's good at thinking outside the box, he sees the best in people... Goku is an all-around good person, aside from being a bit naive & irresponsible.

The only times I ever really got frustrated with him was the Buu arc, and the Universal Survival arc. ESPECIALLY the Universal Survival arc...
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Fionordequester 6 Fevereiro 2020
Matrixkid was saying:
Yikes. I've seen the comments section be dicey before, but this is something else completely. I think in the last 50 comments, only 2-3 were actually positive.


It's always been this way, ever since Cell vs Dabra. For better or worse, critics have felt free to let loose.

Some of it's justified, some of it isn't. You're not changing it, regardless.



In regards to the pacing, that's a structural problem with a few pages a week (rather than a bunch of pages weekly, like Toriyama).

And, if this is what Salagir needs to do, then that's what he needs to do. Just don't be surprised when people are always grumbling about the pacing.

Matrixkid was saying:
Bra' character and Bad Writing


None of what you brought up addresses the fundamental problem: That Bra (as portrayed in this comic) is an all-around unpleasant person.

She gets smarter & wiser, yes... But she never becomes kinder, or humbler. People root for the underdog, and despise the privileged.

What's more, she almost never faces any consequences for her flaws. The few times she does, the story quickly bails her out before she can learn anything from it.

In short... she's just not someone most people would root for. If Salagir DOES plan on making her such a person, then he's taking a really long time to do it
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Fionordequester 6 Fevereiro 2020
Kellaz7639 was saying:
I love majin bra but I feel like the hit should of connected and knocked the sense out of her mouth or something

Plus shouldn't babdi be running out of air by now ??


It's Dragon Ball Z. Even 5 minutes is practically an eternity.
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Fionordequester 6 Fevereiro 2020
Oh... Ok, so Salagir DIDN'T keep track...

[quote from="Salagir (Page 1923)"]Salagir was saying: To be honest, I keep track of whose gohan is each, but I gave up on the Piccolos long ago :D[/quote]

...sigh...
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Fionordequester 6 Fevereiro 2020
So U16 Piccolo was paired up with U18 Gohan, and U18 Piccolo was paired with U16 Gohan? On Page 1979?

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That's the only way it possibly makes sense for any of the Piccolos to have exactly 2 beans. We know for a fact that U18 Piccolo was the first one to spend a Senzu, after all (because he mentioned "his Gohan", when U18 Gohan was teleported into space)...

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Which... isn't impossible... but it definitely doesn't make as much sense. I don't know why the Piccolos would choose to partner with their opposite universe Gohans.

Salagir DID keep track of which Piccolo was which, and who had how many beans... right? 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 3 Fevereiro 2020
Alright, just to give you all a heads up... We have TWO Senzu Beans left...

1) Each Piccolo started with six, as seen on Page 1601.

2) U18 Piccolo then gave a bean to U16 Gohan on Page 1623... So that's 5 more beans (3 on U16, 2 on U18)

3) U18 Piccolo then gave another bean to U18 Gohan, while Bra was away on Page 1679... So that's 4 more beans (3 on U16, 1 on U18)

4) Logically speaking, this means that U16 Piccolo had to be the one to heal U18 Gohan when his spine got broken on Page 1683. Otherwise, U18 Piccolo wouldn't have a bean for Bra to take... So that's 3 more beans (2 on U16, 1 on U18)

5) The Piccolo that healed U18 Gohan is still with him right now, as of Page 1992. Bra killed the other one, who only had ONE bean left... [b]So that's 2 more beans (2 on U16, 0 on U18)

So Bra's not going to get a full boost from this one. Plus, our heroes still have two of their own to spend however they choose. Don't worry guys, we are approaching the end...

Not that I'm in any hurry for more Specials, but... there we are.
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Fionordequester 3 Fevereiro 2020
I don't know how often Salagir reads the French pages compared to the English ones, but I have a question. The Piccolos started out with three beans each...

https://w...f83cd422c914962

Then they were going to give a bean to U18 Gohan before he got warped into space...

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Then they succeeded in giving on to U16 Gohan...

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Then the U18 Gohan got a bean later on, when his spinal cord was broken...

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So... Are we currently down to 4 beans? Or 3? I'm not sure whether or not U18 Gohan ever get a bean BEFORE his spine was broken? Or did he only get one after? The artwork never showed us. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 28 Janeiro 2020
@DarkClaw I don't think it's a full body shield. She's just covering one side of Gohan.
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Fionordequester 27 Dezembro 2019
Staarmie was saying:
I'm pretty sure you guys are ignoring a big fact: Initial 13 story was written so long ago, the current artist/atuhor of this short special might have done some small changes.



If that was the case, it shouldn't have been released as it was. Salagir should've asked for tweaks. 1 Replie(s)
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Fionordequester 27 Dezembro 2019
I feel let down. I've a Bachelor's degree in Psychology, and I cannot think of what kind of programming Goku would've been through to make him act like this. Someone who acts normal towards animals, and an utter sociopath towards humans.

Perhaps they could've got him "addicted" to killing humanoids?
Repeated the exercise so many times that it just became 2nd nature to him? But that wouldn't have suppressed his emotions. It wouldn't have taken away his need for love and companionship. He would've just been violently conflicted.

Realistically, a Goku that could bond with Krillin in just a day should've been able to bond with Gohan after several months. There should've been way more of a conflict...

But oh well. This was a letdown... But I can't think of what would've been believable, either. Not with all the powerful fighters that could've stomped him. 1 Replie(s)
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