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12/04/21
Hello to all, so far I'm getting to grips with the site, I'm just a guy that contributes and works a lot.
Hello to all, so far I'm getting to grips with the site, I'm just a guy that contributes and works a lot.
thebritwriter is part of the DBMultiverse team.
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thebritwriter
4h , 37mn
Tribun Erset was saying:
FishNChips
It's not without reason that something like Genkidama was created by us. A product based on similar themes: billions of weaklings with a few Ki units can, when combined, bring down one with a billion Ki. What a classic shounen move. :p
And let's not forget that they didn't let the stag reach his full form, and in this dwarf form, he limited himself in strength, no matter how you look at it. It's as if Goku, instead of using successive levels of SSJ, put several ton weights on his paws and legs on his base form. ;)
butchslayer69
Each of them contributed to the Saiyan triumph, but if it weren't for that joint attack on Frieza before the appearance of SSJ Vegeta and LSSJ Broly, they wouldn't have managed to cheat fate.
Square,
calm down, hold on. 4 more pages. ;)
It's not without reason that something like Genkidama was created by us. A product based on similar themes: billions of weaklings with a few Ki units can, when combined, bring down one with a billion Ki. What a classic shounen move. :p
And let's not forget that they didn't let the stag reach his full form, and in this dwarf form, he limited himself in strength, no matter how you look at it. It's as if Goku, instead of using successive levels of SSJ, put several ton weights on his paws and legs on his base form. ;)
butchslayer69
Each of them contributed to the Saiyan triumph, but if it weren't for that joint attack on Frieza before the appearance of SSJ Vegeta and LSSJ Broly, they wouldn't have managed to cheat fate.
Square,
calm down, hold on. 4 more pages. ;)
Przygotowując kilka wersji szkiców stron, aby dać Salagirowi możliwość wyboru, zdałem sobie sprawę, że brakuje w nich wizualnego zobrazowania różnicy w sile między Friezą a pozostałymi Saiyanami. Dodałem więc dwie sceny: jedną, w której Bardock z trudem odpiera promień śmierci (Death Beam), oraz tę tutaj – mającą pokazać, że to właśnie arogancja Friezy sprawia, iż Saiyanie wciąż jeszcze walczą.
updates:
https://f...erse-3.1329079/
thebritwriter
4h , 43mn
Kakarot1203 was saying:
There. now everyone sees how much frieza was toying with them the last few panels
It was what I had in mind when making the pages for salagir, adding there need to be a comparison of the gap in power and further underline saiyans are only alive because of frieza's arrogance.
(For everyone as well) more wip content and other notes including a second version of this, found in link below:
https://f...erse-3.1329079/
thebritwriter
4h , 46mn
Myself, Who Else was saying:
That perspective is very AI-like.
No se utilizó inteligencia artificial, aunque estoy considerando emplearla para el coloreado, con el fin de ahorrar tiempo y reducir la fatiga en mi mano. Esta obra fue dibujada a mano y cuenta con dos versiones. Puedes consultar la publicación más reciente en el enlace, donde muestro todo el proceso de creación.
https://f...erse-3.1329079/
thebritwriter
27 Szeptember
JJL was saying:
Ok i can suspension of disbelief them beating Jeice but how did Dore not immediately decapitate Amar with that uppercut? If Saulzas power level is 100k, Dores would have to be atleast 80-90k since the difference between them is not very high. And Amar has to be weaker than Bardocks 50k right? Unless maybe Bardock is only the leader because of his visions but even then Amar would need to be almost twice as strong as Bardock for this battle.
Im loving the special so far but the power-scaling is definitely very inconsistent.
That said ,i do think a Bardock Hanasia 1v1 is better than if they all ganged up on her, and some others have came up good explanations as to how Hanasia could be around that level. So id take Amar somehow being even with Dore if thats needed for that.
Im loving the special so far but the power-scaling is definitely very inconsistent.
That said ,i do think a Bardock Hanasia 1v1 is better than if they all ganged up on her, and some others have came up good explanations as to how Hanasia could be around that level. So id take Amar somehow being even with Dore if thats needed for that.
Orignially the brawl draft was different, in that the saiyans brutalised everyone, with Raichi getting increasingly angry. The point of it was saiyans were now getting out of hand in their power level but not entirely one sided, but enough to warrant a easclation.
While Salagir agreed to the brawl he still wanted changes that I made, so instead of Amar decpiating Doer's head, you get what you see now and other things.
As for the jeice fight, that occured...because in the revised brawl we forgot to include him in the fight, so that was a quick rid of him.
In same way I made a page that was removed which showed what happened to the other sayains and that left the planet with bardock. Only this time I felt we couldn't have another character 'vanish' so Jeice was thrown in after the brawl was done. (Silver lining, I get to remind people saiyans are barbaric.)
That said, it was to my understanding Salagir wasn't going to include the page with Jeice's death, so I was surprised it was put up. Hell, copies I gave to Mondo Cool didn't include that page!
Roos: Unification of a vision isn't achievable in short term let alone long term. (And to note during research it was learnt old sayain armor ghosts were there in the muliverse fight with vegeta and raichi) By having vegeta destroy the statues of hanasia and broly he was reasserting his own views (this is still saiyan era mindset vegeta) and Amar is mplied to be a supporter of the Vegeta household, so him wearing old armor is because the former king wears it to.
Some comments have brought this up and why does Amar dislike Bardock. There were two reasons, firstly Amar is a classist. He does not like how Bardock unsettled the heriarchy, and believes he set Hanasia to win her right to rule. I did have a script that was rejected which he states not just that but how Bardock's use of his powers to forsee threats has made him into a coward and relying on favourable circumstances (like saving the saiyans in the battle because (again rejected) he had a vision where he was killed, and only intervened knowing the danger and how to counter it) Amar argued that this is making Bardock mainpulative, using others to allow a favourable opening.
As a retort Bardock tells Amar outright about his secret, rather then be horrorfied, Amar is a bit smug about it, and agress he won't get in bardock's way if he says nothing.
Now that revelation was going to be revealed in a series of images showing a summarised backstory of the saiyans in this. Amar's was an attempt to be despicable, even for a saiyan.
That I will reveal when the story is done but the images were rejected as that's not what Salagir wanted.
So there are reasons as to why some things occured but I could never been able to put in.
thebritwriter
27 Szeptember
Quck everyone, raise your hands and give Amar energy for his fight. We believe in you Ammar! :P
(Not gone been extremely busy, will provide replies and all that to comments at some point)
What I can say is I asked Salagir for this extended fight, orignally it was going to be one page, everyone vs Hansia and they just about prevail.
The other ghosts and all that, never came about. Everything you seeing is because i insisted we have a brawl. (That I believed it had greater signficance for Bardock and Hanasia to have their own duel instead of all vs her)
Even then when the fight was done, originally Gludo was in this but was cut out.
@SuperSaiyanGodVegeto No colour version of it existed when this was done, making it red was my own call.
(Not gone been extremely busy, will provide replies and all that to comments at some point)
What I can say is I asked Salagir for this extended fight, orignally it was going to be one page, everyone vs Hansia and they just about prevail.
The other ghosts and all that, never came about. Everything you seeing is because i insisted we have a brawl. (That I believed it had greater signficance for Bardock and Hanasia to have their own duel instead of all vs her)
Even then when the fight was done, originally Gludo was in this but was cut out.
@SuperSaiyanGodVegeto No colour version of it existed when this was done, making it red was my own call.
thebritwriter
28 Augusztus
Damian Qualshy was saying:
I just realized.. Isn't Bardock supposed to have his red bandana? Because I can understand his outfit being a different color, but not the lack of his iconic, bloodied piece of cloth! IIRC the first half of Bardock OVA special still happened in this universe.
The bandana occured after Bardock came acorss his slained comrades.
In this DBM version Bardock accepted the vision without question what would happen, wasn't knocked out by the psionic curse, and the group went straight back to planet vegeta.
The red bandanna will make a return at some point, and I can't say where, or when (I mean I can because consequences be dammed, but I'm being considerate to salagir's plans with this)
@kcheeb amd Matrixkid
Ok, looking back I hadn't done a good enough job amending the armband to be one of the other saiyans. On this occassion that's not my best work and could do better with that, I wasn't thinking fully with all other details to draw. For the record I am making notes anything people have picked up regarding inconsistency, this is what I regard as one and will give a corrected version in near future. For the physical copy in conventions.
@SSj2Nick
Expect push back to an invasion. (aka await next page)
thebritwriter
24 Augusztus
iron leaf was saying:
I wonder why some Saiyans are once again wearing completely new armor that no longer matches the style established during Bardock’s reign. It would make sense for each ruler to have their own style or uniforms, but I didn’t think the Saiyans would mix things up with previous versions. It creates the impression that not all Saiyans are united, but that some are even loyal to other factions (Bardock - Vegeta, etc). That’s definitely an interesting detail, and I’m curious to see if it will become relevant later on.
Oh the new Saiyans. Fascinating. These names follow the same Saiyan naming tradition as usual (vegetable-based), just using more formal scientific genus names instead of everyday words like “carrot” or “broccoli”.
Genus Brassica = the entire cabbage family
Genus Solanum = Potato - Tomato - Eggplant
Genus Amaranthus = used both as a leafy vegetable (similar to spinach)
But the fact that “Amaranthus” is split into two names seems like a huge... coincidence.
Oh the new Saiyans. Fascinating. These names follow the same Saiyan naming tradition as usual (vegetable-based), just using more formal scientific genus names instead of everyday words like “carrot” or “broccoli”.
Genus Brassica = the entire cabbage family
Genus Solanum = Potato - Tomato - Eggplant
Genus Amaranthus = used both as a leafy vegetable (similar to spinach)
But the fact that “Amaranthus” is split into two names seems like a huge... coincidence.
The names i came up with.
Including Amaranthus.
You see...a certain Mod looked at my sketch work a while back and said something along the lines that the bald guy was not nappa or a discount. Or something like that.
So I figured, 'you know what? Just for that I'll get you named into this story..as a saiyan.'
So after doing extensive research I looked up names and delved deep.
Now really I did the names to try and give some identifcation to the story.
I decided to come up with names for the other saiyans for sake of easier identification.
Amaranthus was very intentionally split into two.
Partly to eastablish father-son (Amar) (Anthus)
But really, I just wanted to get Ammar named as a saiyan for retribution for his 'not Nappa' remark!
Congratulations Ammar you are now canonically a saiyan!
thebritwriter
22 Augusztus
Tribun Erset was saying:
Well, now for more details from the website. I love colorful specials, and apparently the whole thing will be like that! n_n
— Cool Easter egg with Gine in the first frame, standing next to a ruined statue of Boly. Too bad it's not Hanasia. It would be a double whammy in one frame. ;p
— That bald guy waving his hand is probably one of King Vegeta's henchmen from some DBZ movie. I don't remember which one right now.
— I also recognize that dinosaur lying next to Vegeta from somewhere. I don't know if they fought each other in some special, hmm...
— The statues refer to page 1476.
— The action takes place in the same year as Raditz's original invasion of Earth (and then Vegeta and Nappa).
— Over the course of 34 years, as many as 6 kings (counting Goku's father twice) have appeared in the following order: King Vegeta, Bardock, Hanasia, Broly, Vegeta Jr. and finally, Bardock again. :D
— With this special, Universe 3 advanced with the highest number of them (8) compared to the other nineteen universes. ^^
I don't know about you, but I'm secretly hoping that, in addition to grasping the last few years of the carefree fate of the Saiyans in this universe, maybe Bardock's head will shine again with some new visions of what awaits us in the future. As new fuel for long debates for years to come. ;)
— Cool Easter egg with Gine in the first frame, standing next to a ruined statue of Boly. Too bad it's not Hanasia. It would be a double whammy in one frame. ;p
— That bald guy waving his hand is probably one of King Vegeta's henchmen from some DBZ movie. I don't remember which one right now.
— I also recognize that dinosaur lying next to Vegeta from somewhere. I don't know if they fought each other in some special, hmm...
— The statues refer to page 1476.
— The action takes place in the same year as Raditz's original invasion of Earth (and then Vegeta and Nappa).
— Over the course of 34 years, as many as 6 kings (counting Goku's father twice) have appeared in the following order: King Vegeta, Bardock, Hanasia, Broly, Vegeta Jr. and finally, Bardock again. :D
— With this special, Universe 3 advanced with the highest number of them (8) compared to the other nineteen universes. ^^
I don't know about you, but I'm secretly hoping that, in addition to grasping the last few years of the carefree fate of the Saiyans in this universe, maybe Bardock's head will shine again with some new visions of what awaits us in the future. As new fuel for long debates for years to come. ;)
No cóż, to że łysy facet wygląda jak jeden z pachołków króla Vegety… to zbieg okoliczności. Wzorowałem go na postaci z Cowboy Bebop.Jedna rzecz do dodania, skoro zauważyłeś całkiem sporo. Nappa oderwał kobiecie ramię w dolnym panelu. Dlatego chwyta to, co zostało, i dlatego na rękawicach Nappy jest krew. Nappa jest ulubieńcem fanów, ale ludzie nigdy nie powinni zapominać, że wciąż jest zły.
thebritwriter
21 Augusztus
island nation's left and right was saying:
The statue of King Broly is gone too (laughs). Is the one in the lower left corner that looks like Gine a little Easter egg?
正确。这里的吉妮是一个彩蛋参考，不会有《龙珠Minus》的进一步影响。还有其他细节和草图，我会通过这里更新：
https://f...#post-124793848
thebritwriter
21 Augusztus
Fortuys was saying:
Funny, I would have imagined that a Super Saiyan's tail would turn blonde too.
C’était un choix délibéré de ma part pour que le lecteur reconnaisse que Vegeta avait une queue.
Je rentre un peu plus dans les détails avec la première version de ceci également.
https://f...#post-124793848
thebritwriter
21 Augusztus
William H.A. was saying:
It would be a nice touch if Bardock manages to escape with Gine, but if I remember correctly, Bardock intends to be the last one, and it wouldn't make sense if he goes off with Piccolo Daimaoh to commit crimes.
goku456 wrote:I feel like I don't like that the Saiyans "discovered" gravity training. It diminishes Goku's merit and his training strategies, making him "just another" Saiyan. In Toriyama's original story, the reason the Saiyans were so stagnant was due to their mindset. They didn't train; they believed in innate power. Of course, they increased their power with each battle, which is why they fought to the death on other planets, but they never "trained." That was a method Goku introduced to Vegeta, being a martial artist, while the rest of the Saiyans were more like "barbarians" who fought to the death without technique or artistry, relying solely on brute force. This is why they were divided into classes according to their power, because it wasn't believed that they could train to increase their power. Goku from Namek was no small feat with his 90,000 units and the ability to withstand 100g of gravity. Because of their way of thinking, they wouldn't have even reached good conclusions for efficient training methods like gravity training. If you think about it, if this were the case, they would have already defeated Frieza in most universes, and without even transforming into an Oozaru. Now, the way I would justify this is that despite the variations between universes, there is some kind of force that wants to "correct," or rather, establish important points that must be met in each universe, and one of these points is the Saiyans discovering gravity training. Then I'd buy it.
Akira Toriyama: I didn't even know
goku456 wrote:I feel like I don't like that the Saiyans "discovered" gravity training. It diminishes Goku's merit and his training strategies, making him "just another" Saiyan. In Toriyama's original story, the reason the Saiyans were so stagnant was due to their mindset. They didn't train; they believed in innate power. Of course, they increased their power with each battle, which is why they fought to the death on other planets, but they never "trained." That was a method Goku introduced to Vegeta, being a martial artist, while the rest of the Saiyans were more like "barbarians" who fought to the death without technique or artistry, relying solely on brute force. This is why they were divided into classes according to their power, because it wasn't believed that they could train to increase their power. Goku from Namek was no small feat with his 90,000 units and the ability to withstand 100g of gravity. Because of their way of thinking, they wouldn't have even reached good conclusions for efficient training methods like gravity training. If you think about it, if this were the case, they would have already defeated Frieza in most universes, and without even transforming into an Oozaru. Now, the way I would justify this is that despite the variations between universes, there is some kind of force that wants to "correct," or rather, establish important points that must be met in each universe, and one of these points is the Saiyans discovering gravity training. Then I'd buy it.
Akira Toriyama: I didn't even know
En esta continuidad de fans, el entrenamiento se estableció en la página 1490 (Capítulo 65 u3).La idea del entrenamiento se introdujo para establecer:
Que los Saiyans se esfuercen por volverse más fuertes.
Una idea de hasta dónde llegan.
Mostrar algo de temple/determinación a los Saiyans.
Como una salida para la agresividad, en lugar de pelearse entre ellos hasta la muerte.
(And validate frieza's fear saiyans will get stronger)
thebritwriter
21 Augusztus
supersaiyan2kakarot was saying:
I was always curious to see how far the saiyan race would grow in power if there empire were allowed to grow. Now there elites are all probably around ginyu force strength. If they weren't killed by Raichi, I could see a few more of them unlocking super saiyan a generation or two down the line.
iron leaf was saying: Age 761, so we’ve arrived at the Raditz Arc of DBZ.
The statues, ha, they’re the same ones from page 1476; how cool. So the statues of Queen Hanasia and King Broly were torn down. Vegeta Jr. got a new one. And it’s a nice touch how Bardock’s statue is slowly crumbling. Probably because it isn’t being maintained. You could easily call that an omen for the Saiyan race in general. Vegeta Jr., the last king of the Saiyans.
I really, really hope that’s not a Gine cameo in the first panel. I’m not a fan of the references to DBS/Modern Dragon Ball here in DBM. Not always, but in some cases the lore details completely contradict each other, so much so that they simply wouldn’t be compatible. Introducing Gine as a cameo would be a mistake because, unlike with Cabba on page 1485, Gine’s background would create a contradiction in Bardock’s and Goku’s stories. After all, in DBM, Hanasia is undoubtedly Goku’s mother. Gine doesn’t even exist. But this cameo could cause confusion, because it’s possible that people might assume the DBM Cameo-Gine was Bardock’s partner before Hanasia. I absolutely don’t like such ideas and theories at all. So I’m just hoping she’s a random Saiyan girl who just happens to be wearing that outfit and have that hairstyle.
I do remember there being a minicomic of Bardock introducing Hanasia to his new girlfriend Gine (though that was played more for gags than Canon).
thebritwriter was saying: iron leaf was saying: Age 761, so we’ve arrived at the Raditz Arc of DBZ.
The statues, ha, they’re the same ones from page 1476; how cool. So the statues of Queen Hanasia and King Broly were torn down. Vegeta Jr. got a new one. And it’s a nice touch how Bardock’s statue is slowly crumbling. Probably because it isn’t being maintained. You could easily call that an omen for the Saiyan race in general. Vegeta Jr., the last king of the Saiyans.
I really, really hope that’s not a Gine cameo in the first panel. I’m not a fan of the references to DBS/Modern Dragon Ball here in DBM. Not always, but in some cases the lore details completely contradict each other, so much so that they simply wouldn’t be compatible. Introducing Gine as a cameo would be a mistake because, unlike with Cabba on page 1485, Gine’s background would create a contradiction in Bardock’s and Goku’s stories. After all, in DBM, Hanasia is undoubtedly Goku’s mother. Gine doesn’t even exist. But this cameo could cause confusion, because it’s possible that people might assume the DBM Cameo-Gine was Bardock’s partner before Hanasia. I absolutely don’t like such ideas and theories at all. So I’m just hoping she’s a random Saiyan girl who just happens to be wearing that outfit and have that hairstyle.
Just a easter egg cameo, I asked salagir if I can throw in a small refrence, and he was fine with it. DB minus content will have no further role in here.
And adding...the original vision was to have all saiyan statues stand togther, I offered Salagir a alternative version (which you see now) where vegeta has the others torn down, and his statue towers over the ruins to assert his dominance, and the rightful/strongest ruler has returned, and all that. Letting Bardock's statue fall to ruin is to reflect how little he cares for him, despite what he has done.
I can see that ultimately being the downfall of the Saiyan empire, after Vegeta junior takes the throne he starts listening to Bardock less and less, because he thinks he knows better and doesn't need him anymore. Still I'm surprised he allows his father's statue to be maintained, considering Vegeta junior calling his father worthless for losing his status as king to begin with. Or maybe he takes the counsel of his father more seriously than Bardock so thats why the statues are maintained the way that they are. I did like the of all the statues showing the different kings and queens since saiyans takeover of the universe, but I agree with the revised version, since it can foreshadow how the saiyans are operating.
iron leaf was saying: Age 761, so we’ve arrived at the Raditz Arc of DBZ.
The statues, ha, they’re the same ones from page 1476; how cool. So the statues of Queen Hanasia and King Broly were torn down. Vegeta Jr. got a new one. And it’s a nice touch how Bardock’s statue is slowly crumbling. Probably because it isn’t being maintained. You could easily call that an omen for the Saiyan race in general. Vegeta Jr., the last king of the Saiyans.
I really, really hope that’s not a Gine cameo in the first panel. I’m not a fan of the references to DBS/Modern Dragon Ball here in DBM. Not always, but in some cases the lore details completely contradict each other, so much so that they simply wouldn’t be compatible. Introducing Gine as a cameo would be a mistake because, unlike with Cabba on page 1485, Gine’s background would create a contradiction in Bardock’s and Goku’s stories. After all, in DBM, Hanasia is undoubtedly Goku’s mother. Gine doesn’t even exist. But this cameo could cause confusion, because it’s possible that people might assume the DBM Cameo-Gine was Bardock’s partner before Hanasia. I absolutely don’t like such ideas and theories at all. So I’m just hoping she’s a random Saiyan girl who just happens to be wearing that outfit and have that hairstyle.
I do remember there being a minicomic of Bardock introducing Hanasia to his new girlfriend Gine (though that was played more for gags than Canon).
thebritwriter was saying: iron leaf was saying: Age 761, so we’ve arrived at the Raditz Arc of DBZ.
The statues, ha, they’re the same ones from page 1476; how cool. So the statues of Queen Hanasia and King Broly were torn down. Vegeta Jr. got a new one. And it’s a nice touch how Bardock’s statue is slowly crumbling. Probably because it isn’t being maintained. You could easily call that an omen for the Saiyan race in general. Vegeta Jr., the last king of the Saiyans.
I really, really hope that’s not a Gine cameo in the first panel. I’m not a fan of the references to DBS/Modern Dragon Ball here in DBM. Not always, but in some cases the lore details completely contradict each other, so much so that they simply wouldn’t be compatible. Introducing Gine as a cameo would be a mistake because, unlike with Cabba on page 1485, Gine’s background would create a contradiction in Bardock’s and Goku’s stories. After all, in DBM, Hanasia is undoubtedly Goku’s mother. Gine doesn’t even exist. But this cameo could cause confusion, because it’s possible that people might assume the DBM Cameo-Gine was Bardock’s partner before Hanasia. I absolutely don’t like such ideas and theories at all. So I’m just hoping she’s a random Saiyan girl who just happens to be wearing that outfit and have that hairstyle.
Just a easter egg cameo, I asked salagir if I can throw in a small refrence, and he was fine with it. DB minus content will have no further role in here.
And adding...the original vision was to have all saiyan statues stand togther, I offered Salagir a alternative version (which you see now) where vegeta has the others torn down, and his statue towers over the ruins to assert his dominance, and the rightful/strongest ruler has returned, and all that. Letting Bardock's statue fall to ruin is to reflect how little he cares for him, despite what he has done.
I can see that ultimately being the downfall of the Saiyan empire, after Vegeta junior takes the throne he starts listening to Bardock less and less, because he thinks he knows better and doesn't need him anymore. Still I'm surprised he allows his father's statue to be maintained, considering Vegeta junior calling his father worthless for losing his status as king to begin with. Or maybe he takes the counsel of his father more seriously than Bardock so thats why the statues are maintained the way that they are. I did like the of all the statues showing the different kings and queens since saiyans takeover of the universe, but I agree with the revised version, since it can foreshadow how the saiyans are operating.
I go more into detail on the pages done including drafts (like the unified saiyans) and other it'll be updated on every update.
https://f...erse-3.1329079/
To answer your last on vegeta keeping his father statue maintained. There is two sides to this, vegeta has always cared about himself, but he does regard memory of his father in positive light. Granted in DBM he sees him fall, here it's more about showing a united front of the True royal dynasty. And other then Bardock he dosen't have anyone else as a advisor.
On my part at least i do try and do a self mini Q&A on other factors and give reason as to why things on and try to keep consistency despite different artists covering this.
thebritwriter
21 Augusztus
Boomer was saying:
In a previous chapter, is it mentioned why Bardock's statue is broken and Vegeta's is intact?
Profundizo en este enlace, donde doy información adicional así como actualizaciones de la página. (solo en inglés)
https://f...verse-3.1329079
thebritwriter
21 Augusztus
iron leaf was saying:
Age 761, so we’ve arrived at the Raditz Arc of DBZ.
The statues, ha, they’re the same ones from page 1476; how cool. So the statues of Queen Hanasia and King Broly were torn down. Vegeta Jr. got a new one. And it’s a nice touch how Bardock’s statue is slowly crumbling. Probably because it isn’t being maintained. You could easily call that an omen for the Saiyan race in general. Vegeta Jr., the last king of the Saiyans.
I really, really hope that’s not a Gine cameo in the first panel. I’m not a fan of the references to DBS/Modern Dragon Ball here in DBM. Not always, but in some cases the lore details completely contradict each other, so much so that they simply wouldn’t be compatible. Introducing Gine as a cameo would be a mistake because, unlike with Cabba on page 1485, Gine’s background would create a contradiction in Bardock’s and Goku’s stories. After all, in DBM, Hanasia is undoubtedly Goku’s mother. Gine doesn’t even exist. But this cameo could cause confusion, because it’s possible that people might assume the DBM Cameo-Gine was Bardock’s partner before Hanasia. I absolutely don’t like such ideas and theories at all. So I’m just hoping she’s a random Saiyan girl who just happens to be wearing that outfit and have that hairstyle.
The statues, ha, they’re the same ones from page 1476; how cool. So the statues of Queen Hanasia and King Broly were torn down. Vegeta Jr. got a new one. And it’s a nice touch how Bardock’s statue is slowly crumbling. Probably because it isn’t being maintained. You could easily call that an omen for the Saiyan race in general. Vegeta Jr., the last king of the Saiyans.
I really, really hope that’s not a Gine cameo in the first panel. I’m not a fan of the references to DBS/Modern Dragon Ball here in DBM. Not always, but in some cases the lore details completely contradict each other, so much so that they simply wouldn’t be compatible. Introducing Gine as a cameo would be a mistake because, unlike with Cabba on page 1485, Gine’s background would create a contradiction in Bardock’s and Goku’s stories. After all, in DBM, Hanasia is undoubtedly Goku’s mother. Gine doesn’t even exist. But this cameo could cause confusion, because it’s possible that people might assume the DBM Cameo-Gine was Bardock’s partner before Hanasia. I absolutely don’t like such ideas and theories at all. So I’m just hoping she’s a random Saiyan girl who just happens to be wearing that outfit and have that hairstyle.
Just a easter egg cameo, I asked salagir if I can throw in a small refrence, and he was fine with it. DB minus content will have no further role in here.
And adding...the original vision was to have all saiyan statues stand togther, I offered Salagir a alternative version (which you see now) where vegeta has the others torn down, and his statue towers over the ruins to assert his dominance, and the rightful/strongest ruler has returned, and all that. Letting Bardock's statue fall to ruin is to reflect how little he cares for him, despite what he has done.
thebritwriter
20 Augusztus
Super Vegeta was saying:
I understand that it's still set in the past, when Raichi reveals himself to the Saiyans, and not a continuation after the tournament, right?
Sí, exacto.
thebritwriter
20 Augusztus
Boomer was saying:
It was about time for a special episode for U3!!
Saso wrote:After years of drawing and coloring his special and participating in the English-speaking DBM community, we'll see thebritwritter's artistic level. Does the audience have any expectations or predictions?
Well, how curious, I discovered thebritwriter through the Son Bra comic he did; I didn't know about all the controversy surrounding it...
This is going to be interesting xd
Saso wrote:After years of drawing and coloring his special and participating in the English-speaking DBM community, we'll see thebritwritter's artistic level. Does the audience have any expectations or predictions?
Well, how curious, I discovered thebritwriter through the Son Bra comic he did; I didn't know about all the controversy surrounding it...
This is going to be interesting xd
Diría que cualquier controversia de ese tipo está exagerada; la verdad más directa es que salió a relucir un lado mío argumentativo y mezquino. ¿Algunos de los especiales me molestaron? Por supuesto. Todavía estoy decepcionado con algunos especiales que estaban claramente calcando a pesar de decir lo contrario, y a veces con la actitud excesivamente positiva en los foros. Pero eso no justifica que haya sido un abusón con otras personas.
Si sirve de algo, mi actitud no empezó a cambiar hasta hace unos tres meses, cuando el moderador “Super Gojita 3” me hizo entrar en razón en un chat privado de Discord. Acepto que desde entonces me he ganado una reputación de ser difícil, y que algunos puentes se quemaron hace tiempo con unas cuantas personas, pero reconozco mis problemas y mis fallos. Solo ojalá hubiera sido consciente de ellos antes.
*Gogeta didn't talk me into a fight, he talked sense into me. Tranlation AI has it's limits.
thebritwriter
20 Augusztus
Falon was saying:
>thebritwriter
How many women do you think Raditz has slept with and why is it 0?
>thebritwriter
How many women do you think Raditz has slept with and why is it 0?
0_0
¿Qué demonios?
Es cero porque nunca tuvo el swagger como Yamcha.
thebritwriter
20 Augusztus
Burner283828 was saying:
I recognize this artist for a DBM fanfic they did. I actually remember on Twitter it was announced that their comic was going to be hosted here. That was over a year ago though so maybe plans changed? (Or maybe they just need more content before it has scheduled upload?)
Looking back on the DBM Twitter too it looks like this special chapter has been in development for over 3 years. Small previews on Feb and Aug of 2023. Interesting stuff.
Looking back on the DBM Twitter too it looks like this special chapter has been in development for over 3 years. Small previews on Feb and Aug of 2023. Interesting stuff.
Well this special took 3.2 years (three years and two months) it would had been sooner, as explained in my comments on space battle, part of it was time between communication and a broken thumb. Remove them and this would had been done in two and a half years. A world of difference.
As for that DBM fanfic, October is it's release date, long story short, it was done via coffeeguy's request, without any input from salagir.
A reason for that is because there wasn't enough content to take it to salagir and say 'would you accept this?' and that wasn't the thought at the time.
Really there was nothing, anyway at some point it got his interest and I felt I do a mini comic in return for him in giving some details. So input from him was given later into first chapter. Now I was still doing that (behind the scenes) while doing this. I say behind the scenes because its been ongoing and where there is enough content to push for publish but it will slow down after 1st chapter so there be less breaks as we have something of a breathing space.
It is non-canon, more to it, non-canon is the point given the theme, or as coffee-guy said 'It respects the source, but does not expect acknowlegement in return'
Chances of it being on DBM were almost shot down when blackscape did a video on it without asking on the story or when 1st chapter was barely halfway through, leading to misinformed title and risk of assu,[pation that it was trying to tell salagir how to do a story.
Why I in the least, happy with passing details of the story over to mondo cool is because he asked permission to cover it instead of just taking and throwing a link on the video. It's not 'bad' what blackscape did, but it was unhelpful as well as trying to add influnce on what the story should be.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
Vegeta was saying:
Is this the story where the third Saiyan group, excluding Bardock, is wiped out?
Why is the cover a bit comedic? lol
Why is the cover a bit comedic? lol
「コメディ？」カバーの新しい説明です。
さて、これが多少なりとも期待に応えられればいいのですが。完璧ではありませんが、それでも頑張りました。
他の言語セクションのコメント（もしあれば）すべてには返信しませんが、英語セクションの私のコメントにリンクを投稿しました。興味があれば、そこにスケッチや更新情報を提供します。
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
안녕하세요, 여러분. 영어 댓글 섹션에 (제 유일한 댓글에) 링크를 올렸습니다. 거기에서 더 자세한 내용을 다루고, 각 페이지가 업데이트될 때마다 계속 추가할 예정입니다. 관심이 있으시면 확인해 보세요.
이번 건은 긴 편입니다. 어떤 내용인지 말씀드릴 수는 없지만, 여러분 모두 즐기셨으면 좋겠습니다.
이번 건은 긴 편입니다. 어떤 내용인지 말씀드릴 수는 없지만, 여러분 모두 즐기셨으면 좋겠습니다.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
大家好，抱歉如果翻译不准确，我使用的是AI翻译工具。
我在英文评论区的评论中发布了一个链接，指向一个叫SpaceBattles的论坛，我会在那里提供一些额外的内容和草图，随着每一页的上传更新。
我确实联系过（在Salagir的帮助下）其中一位翻译，想看看能不能自己尝试写字体，但我一直没抽出时间去做，被很多事情分心了。这是一个艰巨的项目，但希望你们会对即将到来的内容感到满意。
我在英文评论区的评论中发布了一个链接，指向一个叫SpaceBattles的论坛，我会在那里提供一些额外的内容和草图，随着每一页的上传更新。
我确实联系过（在Salagir的帮助下）其中一位翻译，想看看能不能自己尝试写字体，但我一直没抽出时间去做，被很多事情分心了。这是一个艰巨的项目，但希望你们会对即将到来的内容感到满意。
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
¿Nadie aquí le gusta Bojack? (Debería haber estado más a menudo en esta sección de comentarios)
No puedo decir que esto cumplirá las expectativas, pero lo intenté. Ha sido una experiencia interesante colaborar con Salagir. No descarto futuras colaboraciones, pero ya veremos.
Solo estaré observando los comentarios. Si alguien tiene interés en mis propios comentarios e información adicional, estaré actualizando páginas y cosas así en SpaceBattles; publiqué un enlace en la sección de comentarios en inglés.
No puedo decir que esto cumplirá las expectativas, pero lo intenté. Ha sido una experiencia interesante colaborar con Salagir. No descarto futuras colaboraciones, pero ya veremos.
Solo estaré observando los comentarios. Si alguien tiene interés en mis propios comentarios e información adicional, estaré actualizando páginas y cosas así en SpaceBattles; publiqué un enlace en la sección de comentarios en inglés.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
Bem, espero que todos gostem. Foi um pouco desafiador e é bem provável que eu fique mais observando os comentários do que respondendo a eles.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
Cześć wszystkim, w moim komentarzu w sekcji angielskiej zamieściłem link do forum SpaceBattles dla tych, którzy chcą śledzić dodatkowe rzeczy. Czy to było chaotyczne? Tak. Czy cieszyłem się tym mimo frustracji? Również tak. To mój jedyny wkład w specials DBM i nie mam nic planowanego na przyszłość. Czy to spełni oczekiwania? Może. Ale wiedzcie, że się starałem.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
chocapics was saying:
The artwork looks superb and very close to the manga.
Plus, a story about Bardock, I don't see how anyone could possibly dislike it.
Plus, a story about Bardock, I don't see how anyone could possibly dislike it.
J’essaie vraiment, ça ne sera jamais parfait. On peut, avec de la pratique, se rapprocher d’un style, mais ça ne sera jamais vraiment comme le manga lui-même, parce que nous dessinons tous un peu différemment : l’angle du stylo, la pression, ou même les idées de design. Cela dit, j’essaie. Je suis conscient que mon attitude passée a parfois dépassé le simple fait de soulever un point, je me suis laissé aller à agir de façon mesquine parfois.
Cependant, en ce qui concerne ce dessin, je l’ai abordé de manière professionnelle, même s’il était volontaire.
Et pour tous les autres : je ne commenterai pas chaque page ni ici beaucoup, mes commentaires seront sur le lien SpaceBattles que j’ai posté dans les commentaires en anglais, où j’entre plus dans les détails.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
Musrum was saying:
At least the special looks very interesting... we'll see the drawings don't drive me crazy after the really good ones of the previous specials
Amphiglossus said:Of course, they could have chosen a better universe... I don't know, a well-made one about Earthlings.
I honestly don't understand this interest in the Earthling universe, which I wouldn't even want to exist (and Tensing is one of my favorite characters). In my opinion, it has no potential precisely because Salagir doesn't know how to handle them. I already see it hard for him when Cooler vs. the Gang comes around.
U3, in perspective, has to be one of the best in the multiverse, honestly, all its specials have been fantastic.
Amphiglossus said:Of course, they could have chosen a better universe... I don't know, a well-made one about Earthlings.
I honestly don't understand this interest in the Earthling universe, which I wouldn't even want to exist (and Tensing is one of my favorite characters). In my opinion, it has no potential precisely because Salagir doesn't know how to handle them. I already see it hard for him when Cooler vs. the Gang comes around.
U3, in perspective, has to be one of the best in the multiverse, honestly, all its specials have been fantastic.
Capisco la mancanza di interesse per gli umani: sono semplicemente noiosi e non hanno niente di speciale, e Yamcha semplicemente non è un buon personaggio. Questo sito si impegna a concludere le storie di alcuni di questi personaggi anche se secondo me dovrebbero essere lasciati stare.
Ammetto che lo special precedente avesse un buon stile di disegno, ma non mi piaceva il design delle armature degli altri Jackyl. Lo stile artistico di quel capitolo non sarebbe un problema per me da ricreare. Ma per questo capitolo Salagir voleva uno stile Toriyama-esque, quindi è quello che ottiene.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
Myself, Who Else was saying:
After how critical this author has been of the story and the specials, I hope this one will be sublime, wonderful, and a work of art.
Hubo comentarios que dije, algunos de los que todavía me mantengo, y otros que, mirando hacia atrás, fueron solo una agresión injustificada, que por supuesto no me hicieron ningún favor. He publicado un enlace a mi cuenta de SpaceBattles en la sección de comentarios en inglés por si alguien desea ver más comentarios y algún boceto adicional o algo así.
Para todos los demás. Hola a todos.
thebritwriter
19 Augusztus
Well, quite the reception.
So I make my due, I'll be posting pages on the spacebattles forum that I'm a member on, after each update.
https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/my-work-on-dbm-special-universe-3.1329079/
That thread will have more of my own commentary on this.
So I make my due, I'll be posting pages on the spacebattles forum that I'm a member on, after each update.
https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/my-work-on-dbm-special-universe-3.1329079/
That thread will have more of my own commentary on this.
thebritwriter
12 Augusztus
How do men with guns, from the Naz...Brown shirt convention, Be discreet on the streets of France! (wait, where are we again?)
Bold choice to use General Blue (blame the anime for that) but he does have some badass poses in the OG manga, even some illustrations as well. Still liking this story.
Bold choice to use General Blue (blame the anime for that) but he does have some badass poses in the OG manga, even some illustrations as well. Still liking this story.
thebritwriter
12 Augusztus
I'm curious, well, lurking but I be interested to see this completed (was it to begin with?) I know last I saw this, it was incomplete at the time.
thebritwriter
12 Augusztus
Ammar was saying:
Your nickel was saying: Interesting, I always imagined the smoke as black rather than purple
It is supposed to be black. We just went with the "purple effect" on him. Colorist choice. :)
It is supposed to be black. We just went with the "purple effect" on him. Colorist choice. :)
(Inspects, inspects own material...) I'll see you at court!
thebritwriter
2 Augusztus
Damian Qualshy was saying:
SeanPaul2389 was saying: Damian Qualshy was saying: Lies! This is Ginyu Force trademarked material!
Their trademark died with them.
Not for 50 years after it doesn't.
Their trademark died with them.
Not for 50 years after it doesn't.
Should had use Frieza time units.
thebritwriter
30 Július
Meanwhile traffic is building up at the scene of the car crash that the guy caused.
Can someone give the great saiyan a hint to his surrondings!
Can someone give the great saiyan a hint to his surrondings!
thebritwriter
30 Július
DrewSaga was saying:
All that aura that Gohan had two pages ago and he blows it.
That's our Gohan (cue audience laugh)
I'll have to admit that is consistent of him, he even fumbled despite getting the easiest powerup in Z (mystic/Ultimate Gohan)
thebritwriter
24 Július
Is Bulma actually lost when she already has her motorbike on this new landmass, driving round and finding goku just fine (I get the radar points at location, but so does GPS and I lost count number of times taxi drivers get lost using them!) There are still towns, maps, everything that has familirity. Even in DB there were areas new to her in the OG DB series.
That might be one thing we'll eventually find out, just how did dragon ball characters ended up on the landmass, were they magically transported around once their contienent appered in this world, or did they set off from there with the rarar? I feel it should be the former to give more valid sense that they are lost.
Also...I think Gomer might have lied on his CV in doing anything filing related.
That might be one thing we'll eventually find out, just how did dragon ball characters ended up on the landmass, were they magically transported around once their contienent appered in this world, or did they set off from there with the rarar? I feel it should be the former to give more valid sense that they are lost.
Also...I think Gomer might have lied on his CV in doing anything filing related.
thebritwriter
24 Július
YellNinja1600 was saying:
There’s no way this clone will be able to last long against Gohan when he massively struggled with a elite frieza soldier probably around dodoria and zarbon. Not only that but he would blow his entire cover if he so choose to combat Gohan.
How did the Z fighters (Gohan in this case) just slept on this when all that was happening. 121 pages and still no confirmation when this occured!!!
I think it's good seeing Gohan or a familir Z character but when all this occured is still aloof for rasons that the artist/author can only explain.
thebritwriter
22 Július
I heard as well that (Moulinsart) had tight control on Tintin rights to not have any material make refrences to when Hergé had to collabrate with the nazi occupation when publishing Tintin. Old history but I can see why they would be tight on rights as well not have any reminders.
thebritwriter
18 Július
I honestly thought there be more comments from the English section on this at this point.
thebritwriter
14 Július
I suspect the guy who is chilled out is because he knows that he’s in a comic and is ok with that compared to his colleague is undoubtedly going to feel like his sanity is falling apart as this crossover progresses.
thebritwriter
10 Július
I’m struggling to see the author or artist. now that I think about it, I hadn’t seen a comment from either so far.
Edit: Found him!
https://www.instagram.com/gauvain_s/
Edit: Found him!
https://www.instagram.com/gauvain_s/
thebritwriter
10 Július
BangBang was saying:
Wow, they already found a Dragon Ball. That was quick.
I like it’s straight to the point, I was thinking it take a few more pages till we hit crossover territory.
The art style so far is really good, professional style and detailed.
(Surprised the guy is nonchalant about a kid on the roof, must be a common occurrence in their area!)
thebritwriter
6 Július
I have absolutely no idea what this K-pop group is.
That said good consistent humor with videl asking for numbers on everyone as universe identifiers.
Though let’s not add in the ‘hello my name is ‘ badges, their fighters not retail employees.
That said good consistent humor with videl asking for numbers on everyone as universe identifiers.
Though let’s not add in the ‘hello my name is ‘ badges, their fighters not retail employees.
thebritwriter
5 Július
Is he even chewing? That monster is just gulping the food down his throat, chew and appreciate the taste damn you!
thebritwriter
30 Június
Andre was saying:
thebritwriter said:Yes, but I can't say to what extent.
Is it about Bardock on Earth with Piccolo Daimao, Bardock at the tournament, or Bardock in his universe before entering the tournament?
Is it about Bardock on Earth with Piccolo Daimao, Bardock at the tournament, or Bardock in his universe before entering the tournament?
Non posso rivelare altro, dovrai aspettare fino all'uscita.
thebritwriter
28 Június
island nation's left and right was saying:
It's Bardock's turn again! This time, shouldn't it be Raikkonen's turn to wipe out the Saiyans?
中文翻译：
是的，我覆盖到了一定程度。
thebritwriter
28 Június
Matias was saying:
Will the Bardock special be part of the Multiverse continuity? If so, will we finally see Raichi massacre the Saiyans?
Solo una parte. El especial me tomó aproximadamente 3.2 años completarlo. Podría haberlo terminado en poco más de 2 años si no hubiera sido por la enfermedad y un pulgar roto. Otra parte la está haciendo otra persona completamente.
thebritwriter
7 Június
UltraExtream was saying:
I thought there where 3 Kaioshins but turns out its just an illusion of speed.
Personally I think it would be better if it was a multi-form or a varient, so that we see this more of a co-ordinated ploy to mitigate the speed attack by one deflecting, parry, and other who dodged initally then grabs the weapon. As opposed to the female kai is simply faster, so fast she doing dodging and parrying for the sake of flexing.
It's been a one sided affair for the third page now.
@Steve your reminding me too much of Paul W. S. Anderson, everytime he puts a film on with Millia, were reminded how completely awesome she is. Add some stakes here!
thebritwriter
2 Június
f60outrunn was saying:
XXI, while insanely powerful, is clearly a coward.
He wont fight here directly, using the kaioshin as a pawn
He used Janemba as a pawn to weaken Gast, only attacking him when he was weakened,
and he stopped time to kill Goku rather than engage him in combat, even though Goku would have stood zero chance against him anyway imo.
He wont fight here directly, using the kaioshin as a pawn
He used Janemba as a pawn to weaken Gast, only attacking him when he was weakened,
and he stopped time to kill Goku rather than engage him in combat, even though Goku would have stood zero chance against him anyway imo.
There's a difference between cowardice and pragmatism. If you were confronted by someone bigger and stronger, would you fight at their terms or just pretend to desclate only to knock them out when their not looking?
XXI was weary of other magic like buu or gast, so I do agree he dosen't fight directly (and to be fair he did fight the kaioshin twice, the second part is on her error for choosing to fight a being that vastly improved) but he isn't afraid of a fight per say, he just wants victory.
The life stop ability he used on goku, he had to because there wasn't anything else he can throw at him, immortal yes but he would be ragdolled so much that he cannot do anything.
would XXI still need a kaioshin after all this time? Personally I say no unless he used the dragonballs to foresee the next threat, otherwise xxi is just being petty for petty sake.
thebritwriter
1 Június
Saso was saying:
Kururun was saying: Sorry, but this demon doesn't look out of Dragon Ball and more out of DOOM Eternal. I'm not a fan of it.
Could you post a drawing of how you would have made an hypothetical ancestor of Dabura? I think it fits really well, is just that the art from Steve is not similar to Toriyama.
Kururun was saying: Sorry, but this demon doesn't look out of Dragon Ball and more out of DOOM Eternal. I'm not a fan of it.
Saso was saying: Kururun was saying: Sorry, but this demon doesn't look out of Dragon Ball and more out of DOOM Eternal. I'm not a fan of it.
Could you post a drawing of how you would have made an hypothetical ancestor of Dabura? I think it fits really well, is just that the art from Steve is not similar to Toriyama.
I guess the guy from Daima? He had a good design.
Abura? Idk man, he looks just like a fat Dabura to me, knowing Dabura "doesn't seem to be the type to train" page 112
Could you post a drawing of how you would have made an hypothetical ancestor of Dabura? I think it fits really well, is just that the art from Steve is not similar to Toriyama.
Kururun was saying: Sorry, but this demon doesn't look out of Dragon Ball and more out of DOOM Eternal. I'm not a fan of it.
Saso was saying: Kururun was saying: Sorry, but this demon doesn't look out of Dragon Ball and more out of DOOM Eternal. I'm not a fan of it.
Could you post a drawing of how you would have made an hypothetical ancestor of Dabura? I think it fits really well, is just that the art from Steve is not similar to Toriyama.
I guess the guy from Daima? He had a good design.
Abura? Idk man, he looks just like a fat Dabura to me, knowing Dabura "doesn't seem to be the type to train" page 112
And Bardock is Goku with a scar. End of Z Goten is Yamcha minus the scar. Vegeta and his father differ by slight hair colour, height and beard. To critque on daima design that 'he looks bit like fat dabura' is contadictory when no one cared to batter an eyelid on the series that is known for the 'same face syndrome' It just happens Toriyama was very good at making differences even though his designs were simple, but highly effective. And we know that was because he had unrealistic deadlines to meet.
If someone had the skill to draw out a hypothetical model (in steve's style and not just dbz) they would. That dosen't mean they don't have understanding.
And to be clear artists have varying level of skill, not everyone can draw to the highest level but can have a just a good of a understanding.
Side tracking a little here but why should Abura (Daima) have a jacked design? We all know body shape doesn't determine everything, fat buu humiliated vegeta, Gludo held Krillin and Gohan despite not being a martial artist, and 11 year Gohan bullied Cell, despite Cell (if kai was removed) be a 6'5 adult in physical prime. Ki training is what matters more. Him not having a jacked design can be chalked down to him living a longer life as a ruler unchallenged. Look at other figures of authority.
Commander Red
King Piccolo
Frieza
Gero
Babadi
Ginyu
All these were either ruler/leader of a group, and not all were jacked, or built to begin with. King Piccolo appeared old and Ginyu was in a stolen body, so he didn't train for it. There's versatility, their not all carbon copies from the same gym.
I think Steve has a good style, but the design I have to agree with Kururun in that it looks from Doom (or Doom Dark ages I would say) for one why are his horns much bigger then Dabura despite both characters looking to be physically adults? You can't just say that Abura looks like fat dabura when Hopocus looks nothing like Dabura's ancestor and is not consistent. I look at this character and I see a original design that is not relateable to the bloodline he's based on. Even if this was in Toriyama stlye. he's far too different, length of his horns should be at least adjusted.
I think some of us are taking for granted about art styles and not questioning them when they do seem out of place. This chapter is 'fine' steve can draw and it is a dark chapter it is, but does that matter anymore? We had two dark chapters in a row now, not including many dark specials, broly, androids, frieza universe winning, how majin bra killed everyone and hope to defeat her was futile etc.
There is so much 'darkness' that the stories seem stuck confined to it, and I don't think steve's art style delivers anything new to it because it's a story loaded with exposition. the kai that xxi hates? Concluded with a narration. How did he escape and kill the kai's? He just did. It's a werid choice I think for the story to skip entirely on a fight between the kai and xxi but delve into a conflict with dabura's ancestor without any setup.
thebritwriter
31 Május
Who the hell uses curved monitors? Get that overpriced hype-crap out of here! (And yes I have PTSD from Sky trying to sell the idea of curved screens along with 3D TV.)
I say just going straight to the office is generally fine, some people can get very insistent you have to make a booking etc. Though this guy probably never thinks that far ahead and to be fair, he just defeated an invading force so the commander would probably want a field report, and a review feedback on out of 5, how did you rate your chances of survival and so on.
I say just going straight to the office is generally fine, some people can get very insistent you have to make a booking etc. Though this guy probably never thinks that far ahead and to be fair, he just defeated an invading force so the commander would probably want a field report, and a review feedback on out of 5, how did you rate your chances of survival and so on.
thebritwriter
30 Május
Is it safe to come out?
The art is nice, though some references went over my head. The story was everywhere, something like that can work (Monty Pythin was generally good on) but there's usually a running gag or something consistent. It has its fans though I just have disappointment given I thought there be more to it than at first.
The art is nice, though some references went over my head. The story was everywhere, something like that can work (Monty Pythin was generally good on) but there's usually a running gag or something consistent. It has its fans though I just have disappointment given I thought there be more to it than at first.
thebritwriter
17 Május
I get vibes of that Kanba is accepting this will be the hill he dies on.
thebritwriter
17 Május
SandLandDemon91 was saying:
I love the illusion of an Oozaru Yamoshi behind him, almost like a callback(or in this case call forward?) to when Goku first turned Super Saiyan and Frieza was flabbergasted and outright asked why he didn't turn into a giant monkey
It does deserve a mention it's does look he carries the strength and power of the saiyans in that shot. Catching up I'm sureprised how long this fight has gone on for.
thebritwriter
17 Május
I miss the earlier fighting, bring in more battles!
thebritwriter
17 Május
Before anyone says 'You need to read the orignal cashman' I'm going to say this:
It shouldn't be down to the reader to start blindly hunting down for the original source, usually if a manga/comic/book etc makes refrence to earlier content, they make bit of a summary or have the prior source easy to find.
As a example I have a collection of the RE Novels written by S.D Perry from years ago, the book shows how to get the next or previous issue at the end of the book, with it having a subplot involving a few original characters. Information at end of the book how to get the next one is basically the same as providing a link online.
If there was a such link in this story showing where the original cashman was and where you can read it for free that be great, but there isn't or I can't find it.
Saying this has a plot is a bit of a stretch, it's been so random with meta refrences that it dosen't make much sense, even if intention was to be slapstick or nonseical humor. When I think of an author i think of someone who has developed a structure to a project. There is something a tad ironic in despite quality of art, its more disjointed than some of the content on this site, that has disjointed art, but still achieve a consistent plot. Even for comedy, you need to build up towards a good punchline.
Now its possible this is a harsh response and if I were to compare with the original cashman I can see why this was done the way it was, but judging this by itself...it's very random and if the original cashman is a neccsaity than provide a link to where everyone can read and understand it.
It shouldn't be down to the reader to start blindly hunting down for the original source, usually if a manga/comic/book etc makes refrence to earlier content, they make bit of a summary or have the prior source easy to find.
As a example I have a collection of the RE Novels written by S.D Perry from years ago, the book shows how to get the next or previous issue at the end of the book, with it having a subplot involving a few original characters. Information at end of the book how to get the next one is basically the same as providing a link online.
If there was a such link in this story showing where the original cashman was and where you can read it for free that be great, but there isn't or I can't find it.
Saying this has a plot is a bit of a stretch, it's been so random with meta refrences that it dosen't make much sense, even if intention was to be slapstick or nonseical humor. When I think of an author i think of someone who has developed a structure to a project. There is something a tad ironic in despite quality of art, its more disjointed than some of the content on this site, that has disjointed art, but still achieve a consistent plot. Even for comedy, you need to build up towards a good punchline.
Now its possible this is a harsh response and if I were to compare with the original cashman I can see why this was done the way it was, but judging this by itself...it's very random and if the original cashman is a neccsaity than provide a link to where everyone can read and understand it.
thebritwriter
22 Február
Zefarg was saying:
Nice, Pan actually kinda cooking, ngl. Nice to see her try stuff...
Anyways, I gotta wonder tho, if what she's doing is a:
a) a flare/distress signal
b) giving our Vegeta energy (don't see how that would help or even work in the first place)
c) sneaky attack abusing the way the frozen life zone works and shit, altho even with that, Emperor Vegeta's SSJ3 still needs to run out first imo
I just hope our Vegeta gets to continue fighting in this arc and doesn't just die here. Would be lame AF and the first time I'd seriously complain about writing :)
Anyways, I gotta wonder tho, if what she's doing is a:
a) a flare/distress signal
b) giving our Vegeta energy (don't see how that would help or even work in the first place)
c) sneaky attack abusing the way the frozen life zone works and shit, altho even with that, Emperor Vegeta's SSJ3 still needs to run out first imo
I just hope our Vegeta gets to continue fighting in this arc and doesn't just die here. Would be lame AF and the first time I'd seriously complain about writing :)
The only problem with the distress theory is this vegeta is very likely going to kill one of the two, he tried to kill pan earlier so I doubt he intends to bring them with him unless he had a change of mind. In that case a rescue team is likely to find u18 vegeta first.
thebritwriter
22 Február
Erm…ok so she fired her shot that without air restriction will accelerate faster and faster till it goes back in time and hits vegeta before he hits vegeta.
That’s the best theory I can come up with for the next page.
That’s the best theory I can come up with for the next page.
thebritwriter
20 Február
DrewSaga was saying:
Says the guy who was his enemy's pet a few pages ago.
The RR was watching it all on camera so someone has got it on tape somewhere for a future prank ready.
thebritwriter
20 Február
CRONKdaddy was saying:
PkMario was saying: 仅是剑客 was saying:
The most hated aspect of DBM is that they cap normal Saiyans' maximum potential extremely low.
Blame Ultimate Gohan for that, he's supposed to be the Maximum Potential unlocked, AND he's supposed to have one of the highest potentials out there, therefore no other Saiyans by themselves can even come close power-wise or the Ultimate state makes no sense.
DBM should adopt the surpassing ur ideology instead of capping ppl because im pretty sure its been stated that goku and vegeta will never be able to surpass gohan even tho they been training for years and gohan doesn’t
The most hated aspect of DBM is that they cap normal Saiyans' maximum potential extremely low.
Blame Ultimate Gohan for that, he's supposed to be the Maximum Potential unlocked, AND he's supposed to have one of the highest potentials out there, therefore no other Saiyans by themselves can even come close power-wise or the Ultimate state makes no sense.
DBM should adopt the surpassing ur ideology instead of capping ppl because im pretty sure its been stated that goku and vegeta will never be able to surpass gohan even tho they been training for years and gohan doesn’t
I think that is a valid point, capping PL has it's own cons, most notable when you think about it, goes against the spirit of surpassing own limit's which Dragonball is known for. Goku's journey is a journey of self-improvement. Vegeta's rivalary with Goku is to give him focus in achieving greater strength.
Then you have characters so absurdly strong that others can't do anything, which happened in Z with krillin, yamcha and Tien sidelined to useless by time of android saga, I would support a 'cap' or where the returns of training gets smaller.
The problem is Vegeta U13 were to somehow believe he achieved super saiyan 3 let alone super saiyan, look at the specials; Vegeta barely does training and winging it on a PL that is lower before going to earth in the main series. He is weaker than Cui Cui by all rights before going to Planet namek.
And somehow that vegeta will become not just a super saiyan but one strong enough to defeat frieza, and somehow he gets motivation to surpass cyborg 17 and 18, maybe Cell and Majin buu? SSJ2 had a very high bar to overcome, frankly vegeta's ability to get stronger in U13 was the same as Goten's in GT.
So barring that vegeta U13 matches Vegeta's 18's strength by a wish of a dragonball ('My wish is to always surpass those that I face') Then his SSJ3 should never be close to U18 Vegeta, it hasn't helped that in the five pages shown U13 vegeta didn't really tactically beat this trio beyond just punching U18 extra hard. Basically, he hasn't shown much beyond using more XXI magic which abruptly switches from resuming a fight to ending one.
I don't think it's bad writing as some have said, if anything the setup has been good; however this fight has been very brief. Characters don't move across terrain, two locked in fixed fighting position , U13 vegeta summons a bit of magic and he wins, just after seeing vegeta play protective hero, and loses page after. It goes against U13 vegeta to not have him try to use dirty ticks on Pan as a means and not as a responce to being hit, showing how desperate U13 really is to get a win.
It's close but not quite end of the chapter so more content can come but with nothing foreshadowed, U18 Vegeta is done.
thebritwriter
20 Február
Well at least u13 vegeta took my advice and used his free hand.
#blamebritwriterforthedeathsthatwillfollow.
(That said I assume u18 vegeta is now dead, granted Goku didn’t break into a hundred pieces when he froze and fell when he tried to reach cell but that was comedic moment I assume. Here vegeta is brute forced knocked out, so he should broken up much like vegetto was when i’k’l broke him. The arm looks to be gone at least)
#blamebritwriterforthedeathsthatwillfollow.
(That said I assume u18 vegeta is now dead, granted Goku didn’t break into a hundred pieces when he froze and fell when he tried to reach cell but that was comedic moment I assume. Here vegeta is brute forced knocked out, so he should broken up much like vegetto was when i’k’l broke him. The arm looks to be gone at least)
thebritwriter
18 Február
Will either of these vegeta’s, for the love of god, take advantage of their free hand. Look at the namekian u13 vegeta. Look at the very clear opening. Look at what your other hand is doing.
And your powering up while yelling dominate.
…
I’m beginning to see why frieza wanted to wipe out the saiyans.
On another note, expected vegeta to make the save, I think the damage is just about right. It’s not a max out attack of a final move and it was intended for pan. You have to wonder if u13 vegeta just cheated somehow on his power gains for each transformation because he is a clear distant to vegeta’s form. He might even be weaker then gotenks ssj3.
And your powering up while yelling dominate.
…
I’m beginning to see why frieza wanted to wipe out the saiyans.
On another note, expected vegeta to make the save, I think the damage is just about right. It’s not a max out attack of a final move and it was intended for pan. You have to wonder if u13 vegeta just cheated somehow on his power gains for each transformation because he is a clear distant to vegeta’s form. He might even be weaker then gotenks ssj3.
thebritwriter
16 Február
Beni-Kujaku was saying:
thebritwriter was saying: If pan suffers a mortal wound then it’s her fault for not using solar flare. More potent in this situation. Your trained in Kai pan, you should know how effective your techniques will be against stronger foes.
She literally did that as Raichi's ghost, and it got countered immediately, with the God's Blade only working afterwards because Vegeta focused on Pan. It would not have done anything here, while the Kienzan at least forced V13 to block and cut his arm.
She literally did that as Raichi's ghost, and it got countered immediately, with the God's Blade only working afterwards because Vegeta focused on Pan. It would not have done anything here, while the Kienzan at least forced V13 to block and cut his arm.
By having to close his eyes.
With the rachi scenario no one was fighting him in that moment.
Here is fighting head on with his counterpart, having to close his eyes in that moment is still a disadvantage.
I would say raising his arm to block amounts to nothing with damage being minimal and u18 vegeta not seizing the moment to throw in a punch or his own ‘dirty tricks’ instead u13 vegeta has effectively a free response move.
thebritwriter
16 Február
Hah to all those that said krillin attack on cell was filler and non-canon. For you see, this also is non-canon to dragonball so same logic applies!
Ok so I think the fight is fine but I would argue pan would had been ko once fight was started because there is no u18 vegeta is blocking her and the namek with one hand, he isn’t buu who can stretch and no issue with reach etc.
On flip side it was only for a page so it dosent outstay its welcome.
If pan suffers a mortal wound then it’s her fault for not using solar flare. More potent in this situation. Your trained in Kai pan, you should know how effective your techniques will be against stronger foes.
Ok so I think the fight is fine but I would argue pan would had been ko once fight was started because there is no u18 vegeta is blocking her and the namek with one hand, he isn’t buu who can stretch and no issue with reach etc.
On flip side it was only for a page so it dosent outstay its welcome.
If pan suffers a mortal wound then it’s her fault for not using solar flare. More potent in this situation. Your trained in Kai pan, you should know how effective your techniques will be against stronger foes.
thebritwriter
13 Február
BangBang was saying:
obserwator was saying: Yet isn't this worst way to propose?
Pretty sure I've heard of worse.
Pretty sure I've heard of worse.
Like the guy at the winter oylmpics who won bronze and revealed to everyone he cheated on his ex (her name and all)
I will say that it's consistent with how Mr Satan conducted himself, he was bragging he kill Cell on TV, so it wouldn't surprise me he announce getting married.
Well at least Satan here isn't taking a page out of Gaston's textbook in how to get married.
thebritwriter
13 Február
Ellie was saying:
What does the mask do?
I'm thinking maybe the idea behind it was, it's a mask that you see out of control or attack dogs wear by their owners or handlers. In this case the saiyan was a notorious biter and pyschotic so the mask was there to keep him in check, somewhat.
That was my guess very early on when i saw the character design, more likely...someone just wanted to do a saiyan Bane and imagine quoting about being born in the darkness, and all that.
thebritwriter
13 Február
Kururun was saying:
Thiln was saying: If Krillin and Gohan could be useful to Vegeta in his intended fight with Freeza in his first suppressed form despite being so much weaker, then I don't see why Pan here couldn't be either.
DBZ logic. DBM logic wouldn't have this. To be fair I prefer the way this is currently done.
And as always the Namekian is a funny guy.
DBZ logic. DBM logic wouldn't have this. To be fair I prefer the way this is currently done.
And as always the Namekian is a funny guy.
I'm a bit conflicted with how this is done, on one hand nice to see weaker characters be involved in some capacity. But on the other, Pan and the namek really are a hinderance. I don't believe power wise the two vegeta's look even, with U13 fighting a counterpart with one hand on a namek, and with a child on his shoulder, so either U13 vegeta is weaker or U18 Vegeta is exerting more power to keep up (so at greater risk of burn out) Pan is barely a SSJ and in middle of a brawl between two SSJ3's.
That said, if Pan knows of a technique like solar flare then that would be useful as it affects senses, regardless of power level.
Personally I think vegeta should had lured his 13 counterpart to somewhere (or try to) drop Pan off so he can fight without further restriction, or have the attempt to fly away before being caught up.
The namekian's reaction to being quickly pulled into this fight was quite funny though.
thebritwriter
5 Február
Hey 18 is using Tien’s technique(TM)
Bit surprised there was no ambush, it does seem a bit uncharacteristic for 18 and 17 to be not side by side.
So we have to assume if vegeta either lets her escape or do they follow her from a distance? 18 will potentially be tracked so warning XXI but try to lose the others of course.
Bit surprised there was no ambush, it does seem a bit uncharacteristic for 18 and 17 to be not side by side.
So we have to assume if vegeta either lets her escape or do they follow her from a distance? 18 will potentially be tracked so warning XXI but try to lose the others of course.
thebritwriter
3 Február
Darius was saying:
ssjlucario was saying: iron leaf was saying:
thebritwriter was saying: With the cyborgs unaffected I feel like everyone has been very lucky that XXI never got them to co-Renate their attacks and take out any namekian that isn’t gast. Well would had been a short aftermath if he did.
I’m not sure I fully buy pan’s display of being naive, we already saw 17 and 18 try and assault vegetto at the same time every villain attacked. She’s been in this tournament for three days to add. The whole ‘I’m not like that version’ was covered in first few chapters and pan fought evil grandpa so to speak. I think her being blissfully unaware this is ‘good’ 18 is a bit random. Though we barely had much of pan’s perspective to be fair.
Now I wonder if vegeta, with anger brewing in him, almost accidentally steps out of the boundary that namekian made and make 18 realise there’s something she can exploit. We’ll see.
Multiple reasons for Pan's naivety. 1 she doesn't know much about these cyborgs. They didn't go with the headcanon that gero programmed them for different outcomes. 2. She is like her grandad. Willing to give people a chance. 18 helped during the IKL fight. So she doesn't see her as evil. If we go by the state of events of the wish disruptions 17 went rogue and vegito stopped him. 18 came from the rooms and was about to attack vegito. To pan she could have just been protecting her brother.
Xxi could be doing that to the namekians now. Though that is in assumption that he would need to. No one other then piccolo developed the counter to this technique. Unless he knows of the counter then namekians aren't in danger. 18 would need to pinpoint who is using the technique then survive to tell them. Though 18 might have shared view with xxi.
thebritwriter was saying: With the cyborgs unaffected I feel like everyone has been very lucky that XXI never got them to co-Renate their attacks and take out any namekian that isn’t gast. Well would had been a short aftermath if he did.
I’m not sure I fully buy pan’s display of being naive, we already saw 17 and 18 try and assault vegetto at the same time every villain attacked. She’s been in this tournament for three days to add. The whole ‘I’m not like that version’ was covered in first few chapters and pan fought evil grandpa so to speak. I think her being blissfully unaware this is ‘good’ 18 is a bit random. Though we barely had much of pan’s perspective to be fair.
Now I wonder if vegeta, with anger brewing in him, almost accidentally steps out of the boundary that namekian made and make 18 realise there’s something she can exploit. We’ll see.
Multiple reasons for Pan's naivety. 1 she doesn't know much about these cyborgs. They didn't go with the headcanon that gero programmed them for different outcomes. 2. She is like her grandad. Willing to give people a chance. 18 helped during the IKL fight. So she doesn't see her as evil. If we go by the state of events of the wish disruptions 17 went rogue and vegito stopped him. 18 came from the rooms and was about to attack vegito. To pan she could have just been protecting her brother.
Xxi could be doing that to the namekians now. Though that is in assumption that he would need to. No one other then piccolo developed the counter to this technique. Unless he knows of the counter then namekians aren't in danger. 18 would need to pinpoint who is using the technique then survive to tell them. Though 18 might have shared view with xxi.
They aren’t strong reasons, in the i’k’l fight she did try to murder Yamcha while stating outright she has no desire to change. There’s also lore aspect, certinely in z, gohan’s family never interacted much with krillin and 18. The only relationships pan had were with mr Satan and Goku.
I do argue against the naive aspect as she shouldn’t be a Goku clone, each of the don family aren’t really. Gohan and goten have their own behaviour, but that’s bit of a moot point. The problem with pan being a tad naive to someone she hasn’t spoken to is there’s been several occurrences of mass death in this tournament, even seeing death of her dad and image how he died by buu. The events should change her mentality. Even Goku changed his aspect on giving people a chance, when he did it to frieza, it wasn’t of being naive but to humiliate and humble the Tyrant. Had krillin not died and became a ssj without it, I doubt he be rubbing it to frieza that he lost.
Now is it an ambush? Quite likely, but we know XXI is unaffected by the anti life as well as the cyborgs but that was from the get go. It took piccolo a long time to get a barrier setup and have everyone in that barrier, along with finding other namekians. One or another XXI and the gang have a considerable advantage in time compared to our heroes.
thebritwriter
3 Február
None of three watching their backs, quite an open mark for a shot one could say. Ambush or not we’ll see.
thebritwriter
2 Február
With the cyborgs unaffected I feel like everyone has been very lucky that XXI never got them to co-Renate their attacks and take out any namekian that isn’t gast. Well would had been a short aftermath if he did.
I’m not sure I fully buy pan’s display of being naive, we already saw 17 and 18 try and assault vegetto at the same time every villain attacked. She’s been in this tournament for three days to add. The whole ‘I’m not like that version’ was covered in first few chapters and pan fought evil grandpa so to speak. I think her being blissfully unaware this is ‘good’ 18 is a bit random. Though we barely had much of pan’s perspective to be fair.
Now I wonder if vegeta, with anger brewing in him, almost accidentally steps out of the boundary that namekian made and make 18 realise there’s something she can exploit. We’ll see.
I’m not sure I fully buy pan’s display of being naive, we already saw 17 and 18 try and assault vegetto at the same time every villain attacked. She’s been in this tournament for three days to add. The whole ‘I’m not like that version’ was covered in first few chapters and pan fought evil grandpa so to speak. I think her being blissfully unaware this is ‘good’ 18 is a bit random. Though we barely had much of pan’s perspective to be fair.
Now I wonder if vegeta, with anger brewing in him, almost accidentally steps out of the boundary that namekian made and make 18 realise there’s something she can exploit. We’ll see.
thebritwriter
1 Február
Armandine was saying:
FishNChips was saying: oskarloko was saying: So far... I have no idea what's going on here...
Welcome to the club.
Yeah, there is a club, Yamcha.
Wohoo, there is a club! Can I join?
Welcome to the club.
Yeah, there is a club, Yamcha.
Wohoo, there is a club! Can I join?
I vote to be a the unelected president of this club, agreed? Good.
I won’t lie I have been a tad disappointed with this, early on when this Gohan look alike was going interacting with his gang members and cops I thought there be a plot. But it’s so loose with a story peppered with nostalgia bits from a bygone era. (I like terminator and Star Wars but there are other more recent things to take inspiration from.) I think as a parody it relies a bit too heavily on parodying past pop culture in a bid to create humor.
Chibi son bra did that as well and some didn’t work but it made itself clear it was nonsical from the get go.
thebritwriter
1 Február
BangBang was saying:
So the big monkey can put up a fight after all.
Long overdue, it's been one-sided mostly.
thebritwriter
26 Január
I be honest, I was expecting a big adventure. So I was a bit surprised by this outcome, however the bittersweet and even happier ending is welcome, it's a stand out and you kept your project within a realistic goal in mind, congrats to you on that.
thebritwriter
20 December 2025
I don’t post much as often but I’ll say.
I have enjoyed how the gag from last two pages has gone from silly to slightly more twisted. While I like to when this is set, I do like the consistency in this, each page building on from before.
I have enjoyed how the gag from last two pages has gone from silly to slightly more twisted. While I like to when this is set, I do like the consistency in this, each page building on from before.
thebritwriter
21 Október 2025
Very bad case of mouth bleed there.
I can’t say I followed every page in detail but fights have been entertaining so far.
I can’t say I followed every page in detail but fights have been entertaining so far.
thebritwriter
21 Október 2025
(Sees city) either it’s now an urban graveyard or their sensors broke.
I have to admit I do like alien designs, it’s gelled to the dragonball style you see in manga well. Also the font is good.
Dbfunsexy doesn’t have a SFW link far as I’m aware, (despite searching), that said you can fall down a rabbit hole searching on stuff she draws. So that maybe why she’s not credited publicly.
I have to admit I do like alien designs, it’s gelled to the dragonball style you see in manga well. Also the font is good.
Fordo4 was saying:
obserwator was saying: Why author is not credited here? It should be, even if I already know who she is? :D
I think i know who created this too, but yeah, why weren't they like credited?
I think i know who created this too, but yeah, why weren't they like credited?
Dbfunsexy doesn’t have a SFW link far as I’m aware, (despite searching), that said you can fall down a rabbit hole searching on stuff she draws. So that maybe why she’s not credited publicly.
thebritwriter
19 Október 2025
Looking back videl shouldn’t had come along, this version did very little in contrast to everyone else.
Did the comic have an aim to try and have her rekindle some of her fighting days? Maybe but I think because of the large cast and juggling the plot that inevitably someone will get sidelined. She was sidelined even before this with her last appearance smiling beside pan with a meal ready.
I’m surprised Trunks and Goten hadn’t got sidelined (well trunks in the least, Goten did a few things since)
Did the comic have an aim to try and have her rekindle some of her fighting days? Maybe but I think because of the large cast and juggling the plot that inevitably someone will get sidelined. She was sidelined even before this with her last appearance smiling beside pan with a meal ready.
I’m surprised Trunks and Goten hadn’t got sidelined (well trunks in the least, Goten did a few things since)
thebritwriter
18 Október 2025
No mention of who the author is? (I got an idea who it judging by comments from first page) but this is more or less uncredited.
thebritwriter
18 Október 2025
siksteen was saying:
Well after being beat up by two people, I dont think it matter that much how weaker this one is lol
I imagine n ext page he’ll be so weak that he dosent chance against a blank panel.
thebritwriter
18 Október 2025
So I’m wondering when this is set, (cooler second film when everyone is off planet perhaps?)
Unless they can’t pick half saiyans.
Unless they can’t pick half saiyans.
thebritwriter
15 Október 2025
I’ll have to say it’s a good use or using the same image with how it’s zoomed further out with narration to add some drama.
thebritwriter
12 Október 2025
Ending page already?
This guy must have the worst luck in being sent to dojo's that don't care about sending you into the deep end. If i were him, I just get a 9-5 job and just play fighting games afterwards.
This guy must have the worst luck in being sent to dojo's that don't care about sending you into the deep end. If i were him, I just get a 9-5 job and just play fighting games afterwards.
thebritwriter
11 Október 2025
If only frieza could had seen this, it would be prime time comedy for him to watch vegeta snap and even trying to kill off another Saiyan.
thebritwriter
11 Október 2025
Osha was saying:
The drawings are very well done but it is genuinely hard to understand what is actually going on in any of the panels. Actions are very poorly conveyed and this really takes away from whatever story may be going on.
I’m going to hate say this, but I fully agree. Last few pages have been very disjointed for action (not helped by confusion if the Gohan kid is actually there or not and this guy now having his own laser gun.
A commentator earlier mentioned the story lacks foreshadowing, or putting pieces into play. It wasn’t too long ago this guy snuck to put sugar in a car to ruin it. Why do that? The assumpation I had well he can’t be so strong and powerful if he resorted to doing that.
Now here we get him either dodging laser fire, tanking bullets and even pulling out his own better gun.
As much as I disliked some specials for rushed art and illogical choices, this is drawn well but suffers from very poor planning. And one of that is this fight has been contradictory which I didn’t think I would be saying Aries on in this chapter.
thebritwriter
11 Október 2025
Ayashi was saying:
gokublack was saying: ZGrssd was saying: Ayashi was saying: How exactly does this dude manage to get refused from every single dodo, which are businesses that regularly require new adherents to survive?
Poor students reflect badly on the master.
It means he either lacked skill in teaching or selection.
but that also means he was just a weakling...
That's idiotic. Everyone starts as a weakling, they wouldn't go to a dojo if there weren't!
If the dojos refused students because they were weak then they wouldn't have any students to begin with!
Poor students reflect badly on the master.
It means he either lacked skill in teaching or selection.
but that also means he was just a weakling...
That's idiotic. Everyone starts as a weakling, they wouldn't go to a dojo if there weren't!
If the dojos refused students because they were weak then they wouldn't have any students to begin with!
That's true, most (if not all) dojo's accept children to start learning.
The whole point of dojo is martial arts, to learn and train to be better.
Unless this guy has a really bad reputation then he should have a shot if children can.
thebritwriter
11 Október 2025
ZenBuu was saying:
kingworld was saying: What's awkward in a 17-yo dating a 15-yo...?
This should not be a topic here, please...
thebritwriter was saying: Remember Uub was 15 before Buu sent him here
I have no idea why you think that Uub is 15, but as kingworld said, he is 20 (now 22).
And we don't know how old Anju is.
migoq was saying: I mean technically Anju is around 2 years old, because Buu created her around 2 years ago :P
But I said Anju, not Juna. :P
This should not be a topic here, please...
thebritwriter was saying: Remember Uub was 15 before Buu sent him here
I have no idea why you think that Uub is 15, but as kingworld said, he is 20 (now 22).
And we don't know how old Anju is.
migoq was saying: I mean technically Anju is around 2 years old, because Buu created her around 2 years ago :P
But I said Anju, not Juna. :P
I realised I made bit of a mixup, while this story does start on year 794, uub inital design had me thinking that 794 was also the year GT started because how identical his design is (aside from the outfit,) without realising GT was set in 789. So that was entirely my own error.
thebritwriter
9 Október 2025
DarkBuster was saying:
So this is cute and all...
But doesn't Uub already have feelings for the REAL Juna back in U18?
Won't this be... yknow... awkward?
But doesn't Uub already have feelings for the REAL Juna back in U18?
Won't this be... yknow... awkward?
It’s a bit problematic at this point. Remember Uub was 15 before Buu sent him here (Asura beffed uub up but he was still 15) so two years passed in here and a 17 year old uub dating a 15 year old Anji would be awkward.
I don’t know if that was considered but if uub has a romantic interest it won’t be the girl back at his village.
thebritwriter
25 Szeptember 2025
North kai is raising an eyebrow to this.
thebritwriter
24 Szeptember 2025
Wasn't zamasu just U10's version of north kai at that point? It wasn't till recent Goaswu picked him to be a supreme kai candidate, so he wouldn't have reason to be there with lack of status and such.
thebritwriter
20 Szeptember 2025
Chermb was saying:
I had to open these in chrome to see the animations, I didn't even realize there were any until now lmao.
This is the drawback with animations, not every format may support it (it’s true with generic images but it happens less often)
I know there’s animation and it shows on my PC but when I’m using my iPhone (which is a old model because I don’t buy a new one till I think the latest features are worth it) I get a play symbol that dosen’t play. I do give the artist credit for the comic not being too dependent on animation and can be read fine without it.
When the animation does work, it does pretty well. I think it’s one of the better animation shots in the comic. It’s colourful and detailed. The rain effect just makes it peaceful moment.
thebritwriter
4 Szeptember 2025
I have to say the top image is great, even if it was a still image it stands out, and I think warrants how the story is currently recapping. (I’m not a fan of personally and hoping it go straight into characters interacting and learning about his family and his present situation etc. but some of these panels are very good)
thebritwriter
1 Szeptember 2025
Today was saying:
Trunks said the name of the series. Black is cooked
cue credits
Hmm, Black has the power advantage so we'll see how good zamasu will get his plan in motion without being erm sliced.
thebritwriter
31 Augusztus 2025
FishNChips was saying:
Uh oh the Arcosians come to offer superior technology.
Or cloaked Vargas want to take Kakodaiman to the Multiverse Tournament :> (yes I know it's not related to the main comic book I am just kidddin)
Or cloaked Vargas want to take Kakodaiman to the Multiverse Tournament :> (yes I know it's not related to the main comic book I am just kidddin)
I wager interplanetary salesmen.
thebritwriter
31 Augusztus 2025
Majin Wasabi was saying:
thebritwriter was saying: I am a bit picky on that considering other areas from south east asia could be used as a template.
I agree with you, you're being picky.
This is a beautiful animated cover.
I agree with you, you're being picky.
This is a beautiful animated cover.
And that is true, it is a nice cover. I'm not bashing on that but my point on using a background for uub's village that should have some accuracy or build up from the material established. Just not ripped stock image of africa. It's no more 'picky' then someone pointing out how many siblings Uub actually has.
Nyelv
No artificial intelligence was used, although I am considering using it for the coloring, in order to save time and reduce hand fatigue. This piece was hand-drawn and has two versions. You can check out the most recent post at the link, where I show the entire creation process.
https://f...erse-3.1329079/
Can I ask you, Nappa died fighting the robots, right? Because he was never seen again and I'm left wondering, haha
NightWing wrote:I find it unlikely that Bardock can defeat Phantom Frieza; not even a hypothetical Super Saiyan could save him. I imagine he'd torture them to death, but Bardock would survive, suffering greatly, and recover, only to hide and plot how to defeat Raichi.
Yes, Super Saiyan multiplies by 50, Baroque has 50,000, which means it easily reaches 2,500,000, easily defeating Frieza in his first form.
Sí. Una vez que se pudo utilizar a Nappa para el especial, estaba claro que su muerte ocurriría en el planeta; la única duda era cómo moriría. ¡El recuento de muertes tiene que empezar en algún momento!