DB Multiverse
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I don't know why but that is the creepiest little tongue I have ever seen.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 17
I don't care what everyone says about Salagir! He is an amazing and generous author!
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Young Ghost sagte:
So I'm a bit confused, is this Canon to DBM or just a fan made thing?
Pretty sure it is a fan manga to DBM. So like a fan manga of a fan manga.
I like how each page is almost like its own self contained joke.
Super Dragon Bros Z page 52
Kjp415 sagte:
Bulma looks like bra and trunks looks like a girl i didn't know it was them at first glance.
Gohan saying "that ki feel like vegeta's" doesn't make sense, cause if it was that simple when future trunks first arrived they would have known he was the son of vegeta(another example no one says goten and gohan's ki feels like goku's they just have a high enough pl for others to sense). It would make more sense if he said "I can feel a strong ki over there"(or somthing along those lines)being trunks the son of vegeta his ki would obviously be higher than any human in the city no matter what age he is
Gohan saying "that ki feel like vegeta's" doesn't make sense, cause if it was that simple when future trunks first arrived they would have known he was the son of vegeta(another example no one says goten and gohan's ki feels like goku's they just have a high enough pl for others to sense). It would make more sense if he said "I can feel a strong ki over there"(or somthing along those lines)being trunks the son of vegeta his ki would obviously be higher than any human in the city no matter what age he is
Couldn't it be Vegeta is close by or do we know he is dead at this point?
Damian Qualshy sagte:
jonathan_vik was saying: I'm a little confused why Bulma isn't hushing and comforting her son. Because it won't be a badass thing to do?
Shh don't say anything bad about this special or they'll silence you.
Shh don't say anything bad about this special or they'll silence you.
Are u new here or something?
Meng_Shu sagte:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Shh don't say anything bad about this special or they'll silence you.
That is so false and honestly a very weird statement to make. No offence.
I feel like we're all making a bunch of assumptions here.
That is so false and honestly a very weird statement to make. No offence.
I feel like we're all making a bunch of assumptions here.
Ya agreed. 1 Antworten
I honestly am more invested in this than DBM at this point. I think the story is very original and good so far. A few minor translation issues but other than that I am hooked and lovin it.
For those of you wondering... The reason he has to kill his kid is probably cuz he had Tambo out of wedlock and society would judge him for that. Also could be cuz Tambo's breeding. Maybe we will learn more as the story progresses.
I'm hoping dog Buu makes a return. Or Maybe Oozaru triclops... Super saiyan Tambo would seem a bit premature in my opinion but I am down lol.
Can't wait to see what is next. Thanks @Goten-kun!
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For those of you wondering... The reason he has to kill his kid is probably cuz he had Tambo out of wedlock and society would judge him for that. Also could be cuz Tambo's breeding. Maybe we will learn more as the story progresses.
I'm hoping dog Buu makes a return. Or Maybe Oozaru triclops... Super saiyan Tambo would seem a bit premature in my opinion but I am down lol.
Can't wait to see what is next. Thanks @Goten-kun!
RetroOVER9000 sagte:
Wow, I really hope Gohan at least gets some kind of a redemption here. This is completely out of character. He didn't even turn SSJ when Baba pulled her bullshit. I would have accepted him killing her for the second time at least. That would at least be in character for his anger. This is just depressing and sad. Worse part is we 100% know that all the heroes here die no matter what. This is my least favorite chapter so far.
I'm not saying anything against the writers. We are supposed to feel this way. I get it. I just don't like it.
I'm not saying anything against the writers. We are supposed to feel this way. I get it. I just don't like it.
Bro... Gohan killing Baba? Are u joking?? I totally get how Gohan could and would be like this. He is a jaded teen that lost hope... Killing Baba tho? Lol what da!? He isn't a monster.
Fionordequester sagte:
Alright, serious question: Is Salagir writing for Gohan here? Or is he writing for U16 Bra (pre-Majin Arc)?
Copy and paste her over Gohan in these panels, and tell me how she would act differently (assuming she was as weak as Gohan). Tell me she wouldn't make this exact facial expression. Tell me she wouldn't have been just as snarky & dismissive.
Copy and paste her over Gohan in these panels, and tell me how she would act differently (assuming she was as weak as Gohan). Tell me she wouldn't make this exact facial expression. Tell me she wouldn't have been just as snarky & dismissive.
I honestly think Bra would be motivated and angry. Gohan just misses his family and doesn't care for fighting. He never has been the type to care a lot about his strength where Bra is obsessed with how strong she is. 1 Antworten
Guys.. The nitpicking is insane. Yes you have the right but who cares. There are a million instances in DB where the characters could have been more logical. It is literally that way with every fiction. Personally I love this story as much as any other in DBM. This is DBM universe.They have to work with what they have.
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Cool designs! Hope they all don't get one shotted or something.
Namekseijin Densetsu page 468
Did you forget the "I" on the second panel or leave it out on purpose? I guess both could work.
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DBMultiverse Colors page 164
Dumb of Orzo to be baited so easily. I'm guessing his attack fails for whatever reason but Misa? chick comes and saves his bacon.
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321Y page 258
Hi frens! Hope u like my dumb little art. Props goes to Le Nuage who inspired me the idea!
Fanart #3119
Logistically speaking... If he could somehow pee on him from that angle it would be pretty amazing.
Super Dragon Bros Z page 19
This looks like it is going to be fun. Art is nice and I look forward to seeing a more comical side of Salagir.
Super Dragon Bros Z page 1
Nooooooo! Can't my boy Geets just get one solid win? It would be the perfect end to his arc. Vegeta deserves this after all he has been through. Just imagine if Vegeta was the main character how unsatisfying it would be to always see him lose even in the final battle. Vegeta has basically trained the entire Manga for this and he still lost.It is like if Rocky kept getting up after getting beat and literally never won. What da!?!?
Goku has too many undeserved W's as it is. He is just too lucky and has too much plot armor. Send his butt back to snakeway and let a real based gigachad take over for awhile. 3 Antworten
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Goku has too many undeserved W's as it is. He is just too lucky and has too much plot armor. Send his butt back to snakeway and let a real based gigachad take over for awhile. 3 Antworten
Vegeta better win. If Goku wins I will be sad. This is like the end of Vegeta's arc imo. He finally beat that dumb pos! Like bro Geets always loses... This is his last chance! Goku winning would be so stale and boring and cliche.
DB Multiverse page 2263
I wonder if the last page was just a fun play on words or if his mom is now a mummy and it is foreshadowing...
321Y page 192
Spooker sagte:
I just wanted to leave suggestion. This page was entaierly unnecessary. Fastforwarding to them arriving at Babas house would be efficient. This whole conversation adds nothing. Even if they stay in the city a bit longer and you want to show that they leave, it's still better to skip this page as you just wast time drawing it, just do the next day thing (maybe with the Dr Slump Sun or something) or change the order of discussion so that this information is the last thing before the skip. It will make your job easier and pacing better.
The pace is fine. Just arriving at Baba's house makes no sense if they do not know why they are there.
Almost-Perfect Cell sagte:
I was looking to re-read multiverse (again) while bored on break and these pages are the perfect way to do so; thank you coloring team!
Now that it's relevant again, I kinda like the impervious LSS DBM has going on but I really wish Broly wasn't mostly a mindless berserker here. I loved the shit-talking sadist from the last 1/4 of his first movie and I really hate his sequels for flanderizing him further.
I am grateful that we get so much exposure to Cell, though. Very happy with that! Now we need to worm Jenemba into here somehow.
Now that it's relevant again, I kinda like the impervious LSS DBM has going on but I really wish Broly wasn't mostly a mindless berserker here. I loved the shit-talking sadist from the last 1/4 of his first movie and I really hate his sequels for flanderizing him further.
I am grateful that we get so much exposure to Cell, though. Very happy with that! Now we need to worm Jenemba into here somehow.
It is said this is a universe with no life. I wonder if that means there is no after life? Maybe the afterlife will sense the fight and all the dead ppl will rise up to cause mayhem at the tournament. Or maybe this universe never had life. Who knows. Would be cool to see. That could be one way to introduce Janemba. 1 Antworten
Ammar sagte:
Oh God! That's haram, Salagir!
There! Much better! xD Made by Just Saiyan on DBM Discord.
Salagir was saying: Add to that, that DBM is mainly for people who followed DB 30 years ago, it's not meant to be compatible with 10-years-olds like DB Super is. In my opinion, to see the level of gore and violence we have in DBM, you have to be old enough, and way more old than the required age to see even full frontal nudity in a non-porn drawing.
Then I want the child violence back!!! xD
There! Much better! xD Made by Just Saiyan on DBM Discord.
Salagir was saying: Add to that, that DBM is mainly for people who followed DB 30 years ago, it's not meant to be compatible with 10-years-olds like DB Super is. In my opinion, to see the level of gore and violence we have in DBM, you have to be old enough, and way more old than the required age to see even full frontal nudity in a non-porn drawing.
Then I want the child violence back!!! xD
I'm glad ppl like my edits! I got the idea from others in the discord.
Now ppl can read it on the bus or whatever lol. Also I just noticed I accidentally cut the bottom off. O well.
MisterDragonBall sagte:
Cool panel. Missed an opportunity to hide her boobs in a funny visual gag, but this works.
I wouldn't have a problem with my 10 year old seeing this panel. It's just nipples.
Much more palatable than Roshi groping women.
I wouldn't have a problem with my 10 year old seeing this panel. It's just nipples.
Much more palatable than Roshi groping women.
Other ppl have mentioned a censorship gag but what do u mean? Do u have an example?
Moth sagte:
Ammar was saying: Oh God! That's haram, Salagir!
There! Much better! xD Made by Just Saiyan on DBM Discord.
Salagir was saying: Add to that, that DBM is mainly for people who followed DB 30 years ago, it's not meant to be compatible with 10-years-olds like DB Super is. In my opinion, to see the level of gore and violence we have in DBM, you have to be old enough, and way more old than the required age to see even full frontal nudity in a non-porn drawing.
Then I want the child violence back!!! xD
Mashallah, the woman is modest!
There! Much better! xD Made by Just Saiyan on DBM Discord.
Salagir was saying: Add to that, that DBM is mainly for people who followed DB 30 years ago, it's not meant to be compatible with 10-years-olds like DB Super is. In my opinion, to see the level of gore and violence we have in DBM, you have to be old enough, and way more old than the required age to see even full frontal nudity in a non-porn drawing.
Then I want the child violence back!!! xD
Mashallah, the woman is modest!
LOL all is as it should be! 1 Antworten
Great work. Can't wait to see the mafuba in action with the OG at the wheel.DKP about to get his rice cooked.
Namekseijin Densetsu page 349
Teleported_Bread sagte:
Dislpay name was saying: thebritwriter was saying: I'm guessing we're being more lax with nudity. I know there was some in the hanasia novel but that was nsfw tagged, this is entirely uncensored, it shows on the thumbnail. (Could be an oversight) but looks like this is a turning point for dbm.
Yeah it was nsfw tagged until it wasn't, also i wouldn't worry about it being a turning point for dbm. If such a point did exist it happened way earlier, but this is probably a one off/U9 only thing.
My concern is literally more nudity, the decision to do it again and the comfort from having done it once already. My outrage has more to it than 'OH GAWD NO BEWBS'.
And while people mention OG Dragon Ball to argue that we've seen nudity in the franchise before, there are factors in that that make it different, the least of which being the time it was drawn. We've moved passed nudity in Dragon Ball a long time ago.
As a side note, as this is also most likely meant to be an adult joke, the joke would have been funnier if she was censored. Not for the sake of blocking adult imagery, but the idea that we're just seeing blocks or something and probably everybody, who will break the fourth wall in the process, like Roshi has anti-censorship sight or some dumb crap like that.
Yeah it was nsfw tagged until it wasn't, also i wouldn't worry about it being a turning point for dbm. If such a point did exist it happened way earlier, but this is probably a one off/U9 only thing.
My concern is literally more nudity, the decision to do it again and the comfort from having done it once already. My outrage has more to it than 'OH GAWD NO BEWBS'.
And while people mention OG Dragon Ball to argue that we've seen nudity in the franchise before, there are factors in that that make it different, the least of which being the time it was drawn. We've moved passed nudity in Dragon Ball a long time ago.
As a side note, as this is also most likely meant to be an adult joke, the joke would have been funnier if she was censored. Not for the sake of blocking adult imagery, but the idea that we're just seeing blocks or something and probably everybody, who will break the fourth wall in the process, like Roshi has anti-censorship sight or some dumb crap like that.
Even if we did move past it a long time ago this is supposed to take place in the DB era. It fits the time period of what the story is calling back to. The censorship idea is not good imo.
Who cares about two circles?
(.)(.)?
It fits the story and is not gratuitous or anything. Can't wait for the colored page lol.
I was caught off guard too. I did like a double glance lol. Like hey what da! I'm just saying the ppl offended are being silly. 3 Antworten
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(.)(.)?
It fits the story and is not gratuitous or anything. Can't wait for the colored page lol.
AberrantDesign sagte:
Just Saiyan was saying: Who cares about two circles?
(.)(.)?
It fits the story and is not gratuitous or anything. Can't wait for the colored page lol.
It fits, I just was caught off guard
(.)(.)?
It fits the story and is not gratuitous or anything. Can't wait for the colored page lol.
It fits, I just was caught off guard
I was caught off guard too. I did like a double glance lol. Like hey what da! I'm just saying the ppl offended are being silly. 3 Antworten
Souhiro sagte:
Gohan-kun, i REALLY like your comic. It has the energy of a fan who loves Dragon Ball in it.
And the shreds at Boo's belly really looks like somebody ripped it in half
Yet... Could you try adding a little pool of blood under that Boo-like creature? (Just for interaction with the background) I think that that, and some bruise-like lines next to the could raise the ambient ;p
The heroes look shocked. Make us shocked, too!!
And the shreds at Boo's belly really looks like somebody ripped it in half
Yet... Could you try adding a little pool of blood under that Boo-like creature? (Just for interaction with the background) I think that that, and some bruise-like lines next to the could raise the ambient ;p
The heroes look shocked. Make us shocked, too!!
Why would Buu have blood and bruises tho? Buus don't bleed or bruise. I agree tho, great work and story.
Teleported_Bread sagte:
The fact that he's bleeding probably screams volumes, that this is no Majin
I'm not sure that is blood and just not idk Buu goo drips.
Is her bum perky tho?? They don't show us so I guess we gotta trust Roshi.
Also for the ppl saying he can break out that doesn't mean he would or will. Even Superman let himself get arrested before and I doubt Roshi wants to have warrants and be hunted by humans. He is a good guy deep down so he knows he got what he deserved.
If he breaks out I'm gonna feel dumb lol.
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Also for the ppl saying he can break out that doesn't mean he would or will. Even Superman let himself get arrested before and I doubt Roshi wants to have warrants and be hunted by humans. He is a good guy deep down so he knows he got what he deserved.
If he breaks out I'm gonna feel dumb lol.
I bet it is an underground monster like a tremor or something.
321Y page 116
I thought the middle monster/wolf was missing half his head at first lol. I was like dang what did I miss!?
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321Y page 99
Saiyan Force sagte:
Teleported_Bread was saying:
Dude it literally takes the same amount of days for a DBM chapter to come out, if not close to that long. So sit down and show some respect. The story isn't boring, anyway, that's probably just from waiting. Everything will unravel in time.
It's not the wait for each page to come out, the story itself is lackluster and doesn't feel interesting.
ChrisOfChaos was saying: It's a shame someone is forcing you to read it, right?
Maybe you haven't heard about something called a negative/critical feedback. I don't have to necessarily shut up about how I feel the story is.
Dude it literally takes the same amount of days for a DBM chapter to come out, if not close to that long. So sit down and show some respect. The story isn't boring, anyway, that's probably just from waiting. Everything will unravel in time.
It's not the wait for each page to come out, the story itself is lackluster and doesn't feel interesting.
ChrisOfChaos was saying: It's a shame someone is forcing you to read it, right?
Maybe you haven't heard about something called a negative/critical feedback. I don't have to necessarily shut up about how I feel the story is.
It must just be taste cuz this is my favorite on this website. I think it is a very close second to DBM and it only just started so that could change for better or worse. I agree you have a right to an opinion tho.
Bubbles sagte:
I really like this manga. Not many DB fan-mangas are set in other eras with completely different characters.
And the characters have an interesting chemistry so far.
And the characters have an interesting chemistry so far.
Agreed. I was a little unsure about 3 eye boy at first and seemingly semi evil girl but they are growing on me.
Teleported_Bread sagte:
Is it gonna be a little more than going giant?
Hopefully but that is kinda classic DB for ya which is what it seems this is going for at least a little.
riceblade sagte:
Wont the 3 animals have to pay for the damages (to their employer who is the owner?). He/she isnt gonna be happy they destroyed his/her mansion...THATS IT! 3 YEARS OF SALARY DEDCUTIONS ARE COMING OUT OF YOUR PAY CHECKS!
I thought they were the owners but I could be wrong.
The 3rd and 4th panel are really well drawn imo. Good job. Can't wait to see the fight.
321Y page 85
ZenBuu sagte:
Just Saiyan was saying: As someone who justbtook the bar exam and works in the legal field... Lawyers.. Even evil ones have clients, not customers.
Either way, love the Angel reference and story so far. Honestly I would say it is a close second to DBM. I find myself checking this more. I saw the author has some similar stuff released in French or whatever. They have a Majin buu dog and other cool stuff. All this to say.. Can't wait! Release more pages quicker lol!!!
Can you please not give spoilers here in the comments?! That's just rude towards Goten-Kun and other readers, even though you had no bad intention. You could've at least put a spoiler tag for it...
The release rhythm also won't change, bear with it.
Either way, love the Angel reference and story so far. Honestly I would say it is a close second to DBM. I find myself checking this more. I saw the author has some similar stuff released in French or whatever. They have a Majin buu dog and other cool stuff. All this to say.. Can't wait! Release more pages quicker lol!!!
Can you please not give spoilers here in the comments?! That's just rude towards Goten-Kun and other readers, even though you had no bad intention. You could've at least put a spoiler tag for it...
The release rhythm also won't change, bear with it.
I didn't know it was the same story with the dog. I just looked up his work and saw it. Obviously I know they won't release more pages I was just saying it to show appreciation.I would delete the comment if the website would let me. Or since u are a mod feel free to delete it. I don't mind. I was drunk when I wrote it anyway. 1 Antworten
As someone who justbtook the bar exam and works in the legal field... Lawyers.. Even evil ones have clients, not customers.
Either way, love the Angel reference and story so far. Honestly I would say it is a close second to DBM. I find myself checking this more. I saw the author has some similar stuff released in French or whatever. They have a Majin buu dog and other cool stuff. All this to say.. Can't wait! Release more pages quicker lol!!! 1 Antworten
321Y page 84
Either way, love the Angel reference and story so far. Honestly I would say it is a close second to DBM. I find myself checking this more. I saw the author has some similar stuff released in French or whatever. They have a Majin buu dog and other cool stuff. All this to say.. Can't wait! Release more pages quicker lol!!! 1 Antworten
Just in time. Assuming he can heal from a fist shaped hole in his chest of course.
Namekseijin Densetsu page 280
Crap.. He dead. Put a good fight up though.
Namekseijin Densetsu page 278
ZenBuu sagte:
Just Saiyan was saying: And now it looks like we can add murder to the list of the many felonies our heros committed today. Maybe a super old Krillen will come and arrest them.
Right, because humans usually don't die before they're over 300 years old...
Right, because humans usually don't die before they're over 300 years old...
For students of Master Roshi it is very possible. I know it won't happen but it would be fun if he showed up or was like chief of police.
By the way I love the detail of the single tooth on the floor.
And now it looks like we can add murder to the list of the many felonies our heros committed today. Maybe a super old Krillen will come and arrest them.
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321Y page 73
Man, the gang is really racking up the felonies. Breaking and entering, battery, and attempted robbery. I wonder what is next. Lol are we sure our beloved heros are the good guys?
321Y page 72
RockyJoe sagte:
Tiny titty
Tiny? Idk if I would say that.
Bardock is such a Chad I am glad he was right.
Hubba hubba! Lol.
I wonder what is going on with the sun moon thing in the background. I guess as long as they don't look at the moon they are cool right? Also, it has to be a full moon correct?
I wonder if their tails get slammed in doors on accident often. 1 Antworten
Bardock Tales Kai page 24
I wonder what is going on with the sun moon thing in the background. I guess as long as they don't look at the moon they are cool right? Also, it has to be a full moon correct?
I wonder if their tails get slammed in doors on accident often. 1 Antworten
I wonder what color the poop guy is. Is he green, white, purple, grey, human color or what. Maybe author will tell us!
Really loving this story so far by the way, can't wait to see what happens! 1 Antworten
321Y page 70
Really loving this story so far by the way, can't wait to see what happens! 1 Antworten
Is Bardock psychic in this version of the story or he just has a hunch?
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Bardock Tales Kai page 21
kkk sagte:
So much for "managing", Misa.
Orzo, having an extra eye on his forehead doesn't help him see things behind him!
Just Saiyan was saying: I bet the lawyer people turn out to be nice or good guys.
He was rude on the intercom, so I doubt he's a nice guy. But yes, rude people can be good guys too.
Orzo, having an extra eye on his forehead doesn't help him see things behind him!
Just Saiyan was saying: I bet the lawyer people turn out to be nice or good guys.
He was rude on the intercom, so I doubt he's a nice guy. But yes, rude people can be good guys too.
He probably is used to bad guys trying to steal the dragon ball. I'm just not buying the evil rude lawyer thing. Granny Bulma prolly told him bad guys would be coming for it or something. Also,this Misa chick is giving bad vibes so the lawyers were prolly right to screw her over or whatever happened. I bet they are family and had a family feud. Time will tell I suppose.
Delphince sagte:
Jesus Christ, in the second panel they just broke both of their own necks.
Human necks do not have 270 degrees of rotation.
Human necks do not have 270 degrees of rotation.
Lol now that u point it out ya they literally just got their necks snapped by a ghost or something.
I bet the lawyer people turn out to be nice or good guys.
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321Y page 66
The art on this page looks really nice. The faces are drawn well. I wonder when they are gonna mafuba his green butt. I also wonder if we will ever get to see baby Roshi.
Namekseijin Densetsu page 269
He probably threw his jacket down so he wouldn't rip it jumping over the fence.
321Y page 63
Dislpay name sagte:
I like where this is going, hopefully the 8 year old can keep the world building up.
I don't think he is actually 8. I think that was a typo that meant to say "since I was 8." Or maybe he is 8 or maybe you are joking, idk. If so, bravo on being a prodigy. I did notice his twitter is from 2015 so.. 1 Antworten
I love the use of the hairline to split and show them both! :P
Bardock Tales Kai page 9
Sayazur sagte:
Belsurs was saying: Gigachad King Vegeta, huh? Even without a transformation, homeboy's the size of Broly!
this one is king vegeta 2, the father of the king vegeta from dbz and dbs and the grand father of vegeta
this one is king vegeta 2, the father of the king vegeta from dbz and dbs and the grand father of vegeta
Is that a Saiyan thing? Cuz usually the oldest has the lower number right? It kinda sounds like my dad would be AJ junior and my name is AJ and my grandpa is AJ 3 and my great grandpa is AJ 4. It seems like it should be the other way and I would ve AJ 4,my dad 3, and so on.
Just download "grammarly." It is free and should fix most problems.
Bardock Tales Kai page 8
thebritwriter sagte:
Just Saiyan was saying: It looks good so far but the translation is barely understandable.
I’m echoing king vegeta 69 here; the narration reads fine, I’m sure there be a mistake at some point (which is often inevitable in Fan projects) but it’s hardly ‘barely understandable’
Comments like these do need to be backed up by some evidence of it’s showing reoccurring errors and such.
I’m echoing king vegeta 69 here; the narration reads fine, I’m sure there be a mistake at some point (which is often inevitable in Fan projects) but it’s hardly ‘barely understandable’
Comments like these do need to be backed up by some evidence of it’s showing reoccurring errors and such.
I don't mean to be rude I love the website and respect the work. On other pages there are capitalization and punctuation errors. For instance, page 8 needs to capitalize "Cold" and make Saiyans plural. Page 7 should probably be "himself" instead of "him." I guess on this page the last quote threw me off so I couldn't really give a better translation without asking the author what they meant to say. It is too long (run-on sentence) and the "held them in respect when they wanted to exterminate them to take control of the planet" doesn't make sense. Like is it saying they held them in respect until they wanted to take over? Did they fear them? Why would they respect someone who wants to exterminate them? Maybe respect their power? Or maybe it is saying they respected them even though at the time the Saiyans wanted to exterminate them? Minor things or translations that could be better don't bother me I just want to be sure to be able to follow the story. I am excited for it.
Sorry, @Salgir I do not speak French (Only German and English) but I could proofread the English if you would like and maybe just give some help that way. Either way, I will continue to read it and look forward to its release. Thank you for everything you guys do! 1 Antworten
Sorry for the double comment I meant to "edit" and accidentally hit "reply." A lot of times a native speaker can talk to someone newer to the language and figure out what they were trying to say. I am here if you need me and I am excited about the story! Keep up the good work!
Bardock Tales Kai page 6
I can help translate for you if you would like. I would hate for the story to suffer or not be read as much because of a language barrier.
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Bardock Tales Kai page 6
It looks good so far but the translation is barely understandable.
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Bardock Tales Kai page 6
misi sagte:
Just Saiyan was saying: All right fellas let's take a vote right now for who is hottest. 1 for Majin Bra and 2 for nice Bra.
I vote 2.
How about no? I don't know about you fine young people here, but my 34-year-old *ss does NOT find underage girls hot. Or stylised cartoon girls for that matter.
kcheeb was saying: Worst storytelling ever. If it was this easy, she should've been redeemed long ago
I am not one to defend anything about Bajin Mra fight/arch(?), but did I miss something? Nothing has been resolved yet, let alone redeemed.
CrashBangAsh was saying: Android 16: "Grow up. You act like you are the only one suffering. But I believe that Trunks has some stories for you. And I can assume they all end in 'And then he died too'."
So true. Very accurate and apt here...At times like this I wish we had a TFS universe in the tournament too:)
I vote 2.
How about no? I don't know about you fine young people here, but my 34-year-old *ss does NOT find underage girls hot. Or stylised cartoon girls for that matter.
kcheeb was saying: Worst storytelling ever. If it was this easy, she should've been redeemed long ago
I am not one to defend anything about Bajin Mra fight/arch(?), but did I miss something? Nothing has been resolved yet, let alone redeemed.
CrashBangAsh was saying: Android 16: "Grow up. You act like you are the only one suffering. But I believe that Trunks has some stories for you. And I can assume they all end in 'And then he died too'."
So true. Very accurate and apt here...At times like this I wish we had a TFS universe in the tournament too:)
True. I forgot about that. TBH she is a cartoon so idk. My bad.
It would be cool if this Manga was actually the birds recording the tournament and that way it wouldn't be breaking the fourth wall.
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WukongTheMighty sagte:
Oh wow, what a surprise, it was Majin Punisher.
Not sure why some people thought it would be anything different.
Not sure why some people thought it would be anything different.
This isn't the new stuff referred to awhile ago. They just said on the last page it is within their reach now compared to whatever technique they are saving.
Did anyone mention the big creepy hand in the background that is grabbing Buu's piece?
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babyyoda sagte:
I always wondered how Namekiens manufactured stuff. Do they use factories? What are the computer screens made of? Who made them? Who programmed the ship? It sounds like an entire scientific side of Namekiens were lost.
That is an easy one. They just wish for some from the dragon. :)
For some reason I just feel like this has been one giant prologue.
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BangBang sagte:
He's really mad now...
He can't be too mad cuz he still has a shirt on.
riceblade sagte:
Its obvious what it is. ITS AN ENORMOUS HUGE GARGANTUA SHENLONG!
It's a big, long, thick, hot, slimy, veiny, fat, smelly, shenlong!
His bro probably thinks he is being nice but I bet it's either a trick or he is doing it to stop his namekian bros from fighting
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RockyJoe sagte:
I thought I was reading a Dragon Ball webcomic, what even is this. Disney's Herules with Pokemon statues and everybody has permanent duck face.
I think the statues are neopets! I like this page tho and the idea of the girls. They are cool original characters that kinda remind me of original DragonBall. I want to see a girl version of Bojack lol
Redcommando sagte:
The only thing that would be cooler is if this page was in color. Uub new outfit looks awesome but I need to know what color it is? Someone with talent grant my wish and recolor this!
It is most likely orange and blue like Goku's what else would it be? Maybe the blue one from the end but I doubt it. But watch just cuz I said it I'll shift into another reality where it is pink or some shit.
Time to send those knock-offs back to the corner store they were bought from! Get em scary green dude!
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I bet the power scouter guy finds the Varga from the cover!The tall Grey one. Maybe....
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AsianPersuasion0 sagte:
I thought someone else created the scouters. Although I don't think they were directly named in the dragon ball manga, so I guess dbm can just say these guys invented it
Ya... Or two different cultures could invent similiar technologies. It's doesn't mean the ducks are the one and only. Lots of races could have invented it independently.
Sorry for two posts but one of the mystery characters is from Doctor Slump! I think it is the bird version of Toriyama! Still working out the other one...
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It looks like they are going for a simpler, older version of a Freiza ship but it also looks like your average UFO flying saucer. They just need a tractor-beam and a space cow going up into it and it's a classic Sci-fi scene. Maybe it is Jiren's race counterparts, the Grey aliens. Grey aliens in the Freiza Force? Why not? I know it is far fetched but it would be cool!
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Salagir sagte:
So, no one recognize the two characters on bottom left of this page?
عمار was saying: why was the first thing that they think about was to create a multiverse tournament about fighting?
Answer is in this chapter.
GreatSaiyaDan was saying: creating a master reading order.
Go to the last page of any chapter, or on the cover of any chapter, under them you'll see special links to help on this kind of reading. Was added a few months ago.
عمار was saying: why was the first thing that they think about was to create a multiverse tournament about fighting?
Answer is in this chapter.
GreatSaiyaDan was saying: creating a master reading order.
Go to the last page of any chapter, or on the cover of any chapter, under them you'll see special links to help on this kind of reading. Was added a few months ago.
Are u gonna tell us who they are? I am super curious now and I can't find any clues online! My guess... Is it you and the artist in duck form???
PS- love your stuff and thanks for putting this out for free. If not for this I probably would of given up on dragon ball a long time ago. You help keep it fresh and interesting!
Now I want a backpack or something in the shape of a wind up key so everyone wonders if I am actually a robot. That's a good Halloween idea also.
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He is probably just pushing him out of the ring and taking advantage of the few seconds of power he has. Just my guess.
Edit-O wait I forgot they have to be out for 30 seconds or something so nevermind
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Edit-O wait I forgot they have to be out for 30 seconds or something so nevermind
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I didn't think this chapter was that bad. I would of liked to see more of buu tho.it kinda makes sense thst if brolys power grows exponentially eventually he will destroy everything. Maybe part of his legend is he is supposed to bring about the end of everything. Brolys is like God's flood to wipe clean the slate and start sgsuh lol.
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Is it me or is Piccolo giving off a creepy predator vibe?
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Please don't let Gohan die in his undies. He deserves better.
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merttey sagte:
TurboBrent was saying: merttey was saying: Just Saiyan was saying: I have often wondered how spikey a super saiyans hair is... Like if Gorko was not great and just say mediocre, could Pan throw her head back and impale him with her spikes? Would her hair just smush under the weight? What is it in dbm cannon?
hair is just hair
spikey hair can still take an eye out.
do you think their hair hardens and turns into quills or something?the reason it spikes up is because of the ki pushing it upwards.you can see it with the other non-saiyan characters when they are charging ki as well
hair is just hair
spikey hair can still take an eye out.
do you think their hair hardens and turns into quills or something?the reason it spikes up is because of the ki pushing it upwards.you can see it with the other non-saiyan characters when they are charging ki as well
It only does that sometimes. When Gohan and Goku were in the time chamber they had no ki leaking out and their hair still stayed up. When u can crush planets with ur finger is it so far fetched that your hair would kill a normal person?
I always assumed it was a transformation and the hair actually changes. It is a battle form so it would make sense to harden the hair when transforming.
[quote from="merttey" id=58150]Just Saiyan was saying: I have often wondered how spikey a super saiyans hair is... Like if Gorko was not great and just say mediocre, could Pan throw her head back and impale him with her spikes? Would her hair just smush under the weight? What is it in dbm cannon?
Ya and Krilling is just a human...but as we know, Krilling is not just human. So maybe hair is not just hair.
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Ya and Krilling is just a human...but as we know, Krilling is not just human. So maybe hair is not just hair.
I have often wondered how spikey a super saiyans hair is... Like if Gorko was not great and just say mediocre, could Pan throw her head back and impale him with her spikes? Would her hair just smush under the weight? What is it in dbm cannon?
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Last I remember, Gorkor was just cooked by Buu and about to be eaten by the people waiting in line.
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Ahh yes, alien on alien crime. A tale as old as time unfortunately..
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kkk sagte:
Shouldn't Vegetto be both out of oxygen and out of time to sustain SSJ3 by now?
No Vegito said he is stronger than the need for air lol. He said raw power overcomes all, even bodily functions I guess. He is 1000x stronger than air!
Lord Rime sagte:
Just Saiyan was saying: Passive does work. Look the word up.
English is a more complex and nuanced language than most people realize, a consequence of it being one of the largest and loosest in its rules and permissive in adding new words, and that extends to people who are first-language speakers as well. Many words are nominally synonymous with each other in the thesaurus but in practice aren’t actually used the same way, usually because they convey different sets of emotions or feelings. For example, experience and endure are nominally synonymous, but no competent English speaker would ever actually use one when they really meant the other. To experience something means merely to have been present for something and perceived that it happened. To endure a thing means not only that you were there when it happened, but that the thing took or attempted to take a physical, mental, or emotional toll.
Thus, “I experienced the concert” does not actually convey the same meaning as “I endured the concert”.
Yes, nominally speaking “passive” is correct by a strict dictionary definition of the word. But no English speaker would ever actually use this word, in this way. It wouldn’t even occur to them. The mere fact that there has been argument over it is proof enough of that - if it were clear enough to be acceptable then no one would even think to argue it, let alone would there be as much backlash as there has been.
Or in other words, if you have to resort to grabbing a dictionary to prove yourself right, then you’re only driving home how unnatural the word choice is, since if it were natural, then you wouldn’t need the dictionary.
The only way to make “passive” work in this context would be to reverse the order of panels on the previous change. U18 Bra exclaims “your passive!” and then gives a diatribe as to why. Even then it’s still weird because it’s an unnatural word choice from a 15-year-old non-combatant kid while in the midst of battle with stress and emotions running high.
As it stands, however, the most natural reaction from Majin Bra remains not outrage, but confusion.
English is a more complex and nuanced language than most people realize, a consequence of it being one of the largest and loosest in its rules and permissive in adding new words, and that extends to people who are first-language speakers as well. Many words are nominally synonymous with each other in the thesaurus but in practice aren’t actually used the same way, usually because they convey different sets of emotions or feelings. For example, experience and endure are nominally synonymous, but no competent English speaker would ever actually use one when they really meant the other. To experience something means merely to have been present for something and perceived that it happened. To endure a thing means not only that you were there when it happened, but that the thing took or attempted to take a physical, mental, or emotional toll.
Thus, “I experienced the concert” does not actually convey the same meaning as “I endured the concert”.
Yes, nominally speaking “passive” is correct by a strict dictionary definition of the word. But no English speaker would ever actually use this word, in this way. It wouldn’t even occur to them. The mere fact that there has been argument over it is proof enough of that - if it were clear enough to be acceptable then no one would even think to argue it, let alone would there be as much backlash as there has been.
Or in other words, if you have to resort to grabbing a dictionary to prove yourself right, then you’re only driving home how unnatural the word choice is, since if it were natural, then you wouldn’t need the dictionary.
The only way to make “passive” work in this context would be to reverse the order of panels on the previous change. U18 Bra exclaims “your passive!” and then gives a diatribe as to why. Even then it’s still weird because it’s an unnatural word choice from a 15-year-old non-combatant kid while in the midst of battle with stress and emotions running high.
As it stands, however, the most natural reaction from Majin Bra remains not outrage, but confusion.
Ya I feel it I just think it works. My comment the other day was "I like the "passive" insult. It cuts and basically is saying u r a basic bitch. A follower not a leader. A leaf in the wind." Passive
Dr Raichi sagte:
@MOTH
No, it's just Salagir saying Bra apparently overcame the "evil in her heart in 2 seconds".
@Salagir
Passive doesn't work. The commentators are saying it, your translation team is saying it, you yourself said it doesn't work in french. So why are you so commited to going against the majority opinion and insist on ignoring language?
I know you are stubborn but this is a bit much.
No, it's just Salagir saying Bra apparently overcame the "evil in her heart in 2 seconds".
@Salagir
Passive doesn't work. The commentators are saying it, your translation team is saying it, you yourself said it doesn't work in french. So why are you so commited to going against the majority opinion and insist on ignoring language?
I know you are stubborn but this is a bit much.
Dr Raichi sagte:
@MOTH
No, it's just Salagir saying Bra apparently overcame the "evil in her heart in 2 seconds".
@Salagir
Passive doesn't work. The commentators are saying it, your translation team is saying it, you yourself said it doesn't work in french. So why are you so commited to going against the majority opinion and insist on ignoring language?
I know you are stubborn but this is a bit much.
No, it's just Salagir saying Bra apparently overcame the "evil in her heart in 2 seconds".
@Salagir
Passive doesn't work. The commentators are saying it, your translation team is saying it, you yourself said it doesn't work in french. So why are you so commited to going against the majority opinion and insist on ignoring language?
I know you are stubborn but this is a bit much.
Passive does work. Look the word up.
Accepting or allowing what happens or what others do, without active response or resistance.
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I like the "passive" insult. It cuts and basically is saying u r a basic bitch. A follower not a leader. A leaf in the wind.
Ps. I like Nice Bra's belt buckle.
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Ps. I like Nice Bra's belt buckle.
We are probably reading too much into this. He is probably just lying and trying to get her emotional so she goes super sayain or unlocks her potential or something like that.
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I'm guessing it is some kind of training like with Vegeta and Cabba.
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misi sagte:
GODHAND was saying: Bra killed Grand Supreme Kai before he could finish what he had to say but doesn't kill this Bra before she could finish saying this rubbish and now we are getting this "You don't know what I've been through nonsense " and to add the icing on the cake. Another unnecessary special about something not really all that important. How about a special on that XXI guy or something or the universe with Videl krillin and yamcha .
If you can't see the difference between a daily inspirational quote brought to you by a kai you never cared about AND being called a weak, impure slave by a(n almost-) you from another universe, who - unlike you, never trained a day in her life, could not beat Chaotzu... i dunno what to tell you. Don't forget it is a "you" that you look down on for her physical weakness, while you are super-conscious of your own strength and control. It is an important factor..... I feel impure for saying things like this.... I refuse to protect this arch, haha :D just being a realist. I was pretty vocal about wanting this whole Majin Bra thing to end, too.
Re: the other part of what you said: I couldn't agree more, I wish we got any of those specials instead, would be nice to step away from U16 and Bra. No such luck. sigh
Just Saiyan was saying: I was looking at this page again and it occurred to me that maybe the reason Majin Bra is breaking so quickly from words is because the Majin spell for whatever reason is starting to wear off or it's been weakened. That's way it isn't so much the words and insults as it is her Majin spell wearing off or something like that.
Pretty sure that's not the case. Then we wouldn't get those internal voices telling her she is worthless... it would just unexplainably start wearing off.
If you can't see the difference between a daily inspirational quote brought to you by a kai you never cared about AND being called a weak, impure slave by a(n almost-) you from another universe, who - unlike you, never trained a day in her life, could not beat Chaotzu... i dunno what to tell you. Don't forget it is a "you" that you look down on for her physical weakness, while you are super-conscious of your own strength and control. It is an important factor..... I feel impure for saying things like this.... I refuse to protect this arch, haha :D just being a realist. I was pretty vocal about wanting this whole Majin Bra thing to end, too.
Re: the other part of what you said: I couldn't agree more, I wish we got any of those specials instead, would be nice to step away from U16 and Bra. No such luck. sigh
Just Saiyan was saying: I was looking at this page again and it occurred to me that maybe the reason Majin Bra is breaking so quickly from words is because the Majin spell for whatever reason is starting to wear off or it's been weakened. That's way it isn't so much the words and insults as it is her Majin spell wearing off or something like that.
Pretty sure that's not the case. Then we wouldn't get those internal voices telling her she is worthless... it would just unexplainably start wearing off.
Not necessarily. Just cuz it wears off doesn't mean she won't have the internal struggle. The struggle is real its just the effects are wearing off so the "weak good guy" voices are getting louder and harder to ignore as the spell weakens and bobbity dies or suffocates or whatever.
I was looking at this page again and it occurred to me that maybe the reason Majin Bra is breaking so quickly from words is because the Majin spell for whatever reason is starting to wear off or it's been weakened. That's way it isn't so much the words and insults as it is her Majin spell wearing off or something like that.
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[quote from="Moth" id=47132]Just Saiyan was saying: All right fellas let's take a vote right now for who is hottest. 1 for Majin Bra and 2 for nice Bra.
I vote 2.
Well she's underage, so.
3, for U9 Videl. :3
LOL I think since DBM's from France she is legal! I would pick that heliote chick out of all of them! 2 Antworten
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I vote 2.
Well she's underage, so.
3, for U9 Videl. :3
LOL I think since DBM's from France she is legal! I would pick that heliote chick out of all of them! 2 Antworten
All right fellas let's take a vote right now for who is hottest. 1 for Majin Bra and 2 for nice Bra.
I vote 2.
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I vote 2.
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I don't know if anyone called this but Gohan will wake up by the other bra and freak out and kill her.
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Come one guys! Maybe this is part of Gohan's plan! Have faith in him! This couldn't of been the extent of his plan or he wouldn't be worth calling smart or a good tactician.
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Salagir sagte:
Guys, I'm sorry to tell you, but we do that for fun, for free, on our free time...
We can do as many minicomics as we want.
(yes, it's the last one)
We can do as many minicomics as we want.
(yes, it's the last one)
Although I am eager to see the main story, I personally am happy with the minicomic. When I said it was beneath DBM I just meant that the minicomic would never be canon because the concepts seem beneath what u would do for the actual story. The minicomics are cool cuz they are like a side universe in the multiverse. I like seeing funny ideas played out. Crap, that is why I am here! Keep up the good work and thank you!
Ps. What is the tape on Salagir's avatar guy's face?
Bra always manages to look way better in the minicomics! Make minicomic Bra canon Bra!! While these ideas are cool and awesome they somehow seem beneath DBM. Cant wait to see what really happens, next time on DragonBall multiverse!
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Clearly this story is meant to mirror dragon ball and be nostalgic. Honestly it is one of the best on this site. I'm not sure what the problem is. It is like going to a Pink Floyd cover band concert and complaining it isn't original. Come on "soulcharm," it is a fanfic lol.