Hello, after page 102, I will put this comic on a hiatus for personal reasons.



It's not racist, it has nothing to do with race. It is ableist though and quite offensive to some people so don't use it at home! :P

Eh bien, pour commencer, avec ce chapitre, j'ai basculé mes appareils de Clip Studio sur un ordinateur avec une tablette (sans écran) vers Procreate sur iPad où je peux réellement voir l'écran sur lequel je dessine. J'ai donc dû réapprendre ma pratique.

A part ça mon style évolue assez vite car... je n'ai pas de style. Je dessine simplement comme j'aime, et ce que j'aime change constamment. Je pense qu'un changement majeur est dû au fait que j'ai récemment lu des mangas seinen comme Jojo et Berserk depuis le début de ce fancomic, et cela m'a fait réaliser que j'aime les dessins plus détaillés, pas les dessins rapides de la plupart des mangas shonen.

Quand je dessine, je dis : « c'est comme ça que je l'aime aujourd'hui » et non « c'est comme ça que ça devrait être ». Demain, je pourrais l'aimer différemment, donc je suis toujours ouvert à changer ma façon de faire. 1 Replie(s)

j'ai fait un coloriage du premier panneau, mais je n'ai pas le temps de faire le reste.

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Q: Why does Goku have Black hair here?

He uses True Ultra Instinct, a "new" form of Ultra Instinct revealed in the Granolah saga where Goku can use his emotions to help him fight more effectively. Better than the, also black haired, 'Ultra Instinct -Sign-,' and perhaps more suited to him than the silver haired 'Perfected Ultra Instinct.' Now, is True UI stronger than Perfect UI for Goku? Find out the answer in the next exciting episode of DBB!

But artistically the reason is because I find it nicer to have a contrast between the fighters, the light fights the dark.




What is Beast mode? He is not Oozaru here. This is Gohan Blanco. Looks like SSJ yes, but his hair is white not yellow! Totally different! 3 Replie(s)

Eliminé esta información del guión porque retrasaría innecesariamente la pelea, así que lo diré aquí:

Está haciendo algunos recados para Whis. 1 Replie(s)

The Gohan Beast vs Ultra Instinct fight roughly coinciding with the start of the fight here is quite surprising indeed! Based on what I see in the manga, the fight in this comic is quite different. So you can enjoy having two interpretations! 1 Replie(s)

on travaille avec ce qu'on a ! :D

Superhero takes place 3 years after the granola saga, and in DBS chapter 101 (although not canon to this comic since it was published after I wrote this) Goku says "It's been too long!" when he visits Gohan at the end of the chapter, indicating that he has not seen him for a very long time. Even still, in the End of Z chapters of DBZ, Goku did not meet Bulma for 5 years and was perfectly fine not communicating with his son or family for 7 years in the afterlife, when he DOES have the ability to do so with King Kai's help. So it's not unreasonable for him to go through long periods of having 0 contact with certain people.

But anyway, the point of this page is actually to make fun of this exact bit of oversight in DBS' story/Goku's characterization. 1 Replie(s)

Peut-être avez-vous raison, lorsque je faisais du storyboard, je ne voulais pas vraiment faire ça parce que je ne voulais pas faire trop de redessins à partir du film.

J'aurais peut-être dû écrire plus clairement dans la narration "il y a 1 semaine, après le combat avec Cell Max"

Page 76, coin inférieur droit : Texte indiquant il y a 1 semaine. La page à l'extérieur des panneaux devient noire, ce qui indique visuellement qu'il s'agit d'un flashback.

Pour l'ordre des actions de Gohan, référez-vous au chapitre 100 du manga DBS. Ou regardez les 5 dernières minutes du film DBS Superhero. Il échappe à l'explosion du cadavre de Cell Max. Puis la bataille est terminée, il détransforme embrasse Pan.

Es cierto que esto no es propio de Whis. En el manga de DBS, Whis no tenía idea de lo que estaba sucediendo en la Tierra y no tenía conocimiento sobre el poder de Gohan.

Sin embargo, me tomo la libertad porque hace que la historia sea más interesante, en lugar de dejarlo como un personaje de broma despistado. Incluso si puede ser un poco nervioso xd 1 Replie(s)

Quizás no esté claro, aquí están hablando telepáticamente. El Grande Padre aparece en su mente. 1 Replie(s)

Thanks, I really didn't draw for this comic for 3 weeks XD.

I made the text slightly smaller overall to avoid it taking too much space over the arts (from size 14 -> size 12), which was one critique I got on the last chapter. For spreads it indeed gets especially small, so you'll have to zoom in if your monitor isn't so big.

il a fait les aplats avant d'ombrager. C'est un processus simple mais cela prend du temps, donc moins d'effort pour moi au final :D 1 Replie(s)

There's a list. If an artist wants to do a special he chooses from that list. Most of the special chapters are not planned (when to release them) so there's no priority of which to tell. According to Ouv, the schedule for special chapters next year is still unknown. It depends on whatever is finished by the cartoonists. 1 Replie(s)

La dernière page du chapitre 2 !

Et cela signifie aussi une pause, et cette fois-ci c'est un peu plus long. Je vous rappelle que j'ai eu une pause d'une semaine entre le chapitre 1 et le chapitre 2. Cette fois, ce sera environ 2-3 semaines, jusqu'à début janvier. Alors à l'année prochaine ! 1 Replie(s)

The last page of chapter 2!

And that also means a break, and this time it is a bit longer. I remind you I had a 1 week break in the space between Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. This time it will be about 2-3 weeks, until the beginning of January. So see you next year!

Q: Where is the oxygen?

Like @MisterDragonBall says, it's miniaturized! Dr Hedo incorporates Capsule Corp tech in his new inventions! 2 Replie(s)

1. La funzione di una tuta spaziale è consentire all'utente di rimanere in vita nello spazio. Quindi, anche se quelle altre cose fossero un problema per questi superumani divini, sarebbero comunque coperti dalla tuta spaziale.


2. Si muovono più veloci della luce... non pensarci.

3. Qualcuno nella sezione commenti francese lo aveva previsto. Ero sorpreso. Ciò che intendevo è che rimangono all'interno della nave e avvolgono il loro ki attorno alla nave dall'interno, proprio come un combattente potrebbe avere il ki attorno ai propri vestiti per renderlo più resistente. Volavano quindi come farebbero normalmente, ma portavano con sé la nave, come se la nave stessa fosse i loro vestiti. Avrei voluto far parlare Piccolo più a lungo qui ma il testo occupa già troppo spazio, e l'idea viene comunque scartata. Essenzialmente la stessa soluzione di avere una tuta spaziale, ma troppo complicata.

Ancora 1 pagina rimasta! 3 Replie(s)

I remember going to the dbz fandom wiki to do research on the character and it said 754. I swear to god I double-checked and that's why I included it because the factoid startled me, but now it says 759 (so you are also a little wrong, lol). I checked the edit history of the Dr Hedo page it turns out this memory is totally untrue, even dating back to before I wrote this chapter it said 759. I don't know if I'm stupid or this is some kind of Mandela effect, but whatever, the result is that Hedo is older than Gohan in Blancoverse and we will stick to it! XD

I wonder if this will break someone's immersion for this comic, but I already changed small details from Superhero anyway (Goku's clothes is End of Z now). I'll also say that Blancoverse is meant to be sort of an AU fiction, that is close but not quite with canon. 2 Replie(s)

Eh bien, l'aura de SSG est le feu, alors peut-être que cela aide.

Et pour expliquer que Goku soit capable de respirer dans l'espace lors de son combat avec Beerus, il existe de nombreuses couches de l'atmosphère terrestre. Cela va jusqu'à 600 km, ce qui correspond bien à ce que l'on pourrait considérer comme « l'espace ». Donc Goku a encore accès à un tout petit peu d'oxygène là-bas, et quant à la façon dont ils sont capables de fonctionner avec si peu d'oxygène... eh bien, ce sont des surhumains XD

Per il punto numero 1, è facile immaginare che Bulma abbia mostrato a Gohan una mappa con la posizione e la distanza dalla Terra poco prima di questa scena. E poi lui stesso ha calcolato quanto velocemente sarebbe potuto arrivare lì da solo, perché è un maledetto nerd. Ho ritenuto non necessario mostrarlo direttamente, perché lo scopo della scena è mostrare quale sarà il loro metodo di viaggio spaziale per il resto del fumetto, non Gohan che impara la cosmologia.

Per 2, sì, sarebbe molto facile per loro fare il giro della terra molte volte. Questo è qualcosa di coerente con il canone di Dragon Ball. Non vedo come questo possa criticare il mio lavoro. Forse il mio traduttore è infastidito.

Per 3, immagino di non averci pensato. Sicuramente mi hai portato lì!

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Comunque colgo l'occasione per annunciare che questo capitolo termina con 2 pagine. Ci sarà poi una pausa fino all'inizio di gennaio, prima del capitolo 3. Mi spiace per il ritmo, non riesco a disegnare velocemente e sono appena passato a un altro tablet, il che lo ha reso ancora più difficile, ma ora sto iniziando ad abituarmi. 1 Replie(s)

Outubro? uau, esses comentários são antigos. de qualquer forma, isso significa que você é um tradutor e se você se pergunta por que as páginas do próximo capítulo ainda não têm texto, é porque haverá uma pausa até o início de janeiro, quando este capítulo terminar. então darei os textos no final de dezembro :) 1 Replie(s)

Si quieres confiar en mi palabra:

Se me ocurrió la historia/trama completa después de que terminó el arco de Granolah el 31 de octubre de 2022 (sí, lo recordé y anoté el día exacto de la inspiración). Descubrí los detalles y amplié algunas cosas desde entonces, pero nada ha cambiado realmente en el panorama general. Por ejemplo, el final en sí no ha cambiado, pero la batalla anterior ha evolucionado mucho.

En definitiva esta historia ya estaba planeada hace un tiempo. Realmente es cuestión de cómo dibujarlo y hacerlo presentable XD 3 Replie(s)

Sì, avevo promesso di fare una pagina colorata per ogni capitolo!



Hai ragione, è Broly, quello coperto dall'ombra.

I'd say he would go down a villainous path if it benefited him. Universe 11 is just justice-oriented. The strongest people are good guys, superheroes so he follows in their footsteps. Even when exposed to the multiverse the Universe 7 people are mostly good guys. So for him, based on empirical evidence, good is strength and evil is weakness. 2 Replie(s)

I read about metal gear solid 4 (never played or know a slightest clue about it), and I find there is small but vocal criticism of it having very long cutscenes. Now its funny that most of the criticism of this goku vs vegeta fight is also about it being too long; this fight carries MGS4 not only in choreography but in how it impresses the reader! lol. 1 Replie(s)

SHEESH!!

I think I remember writing "meanwhile in Universe 11" in the transition page. 2 Replie(s)

In DBS the Gods of Destruction are not really villains (aside from universe 9, dunno whats up with them even their supreme kai is evil). Remember that Universe 7 has the third lowest mortal score = Beerus has done his job not so good. So destroying planets on a whim as Beerus displays in a sort of villainous act is not the norm. Universe 11 has the fourth highest mortal score, so Clown person is actually quite a good man. In the manga I believe it is implied he works with the Pride Troopers quite regularly and is on good terms, which is I guess exactly why Toppo is his chosen successor. 1 Replie(s)

la référence est en fait celle-ci (avec quelques libertés) : https://aliens.fandom.com/wiki/Bug_Facer

et pour la durée des combats, la plupart des combats en db ne durent que quelques minutes :P

Yea, I drew him more thinner and taller than how he is in his official character sheet. His arms should probably be a bit bigger/longer. I would certainly exaggerate his design a bit more in future chapters, but for how he is more "humanlike!"

Let's say maybe he lost weight and improved his posture for some reason.

Finally dude, a big beam attack!

Oh no!

Hello, so now ends the first half of the chapter. That part was actually supposed to be taken mostly "off-screen," in my first scripts but I thought that it would be stupid to not give more drawings to the orange and white fight even if it's not so much. Now this next half is the main part to me and might as well be considered another chapter entirely.

I don't think it would ever be in character for him to ever be totally "in the game", because he does not derive any sort of primal pleasure from fighting like his father, other saiyans, or other warrior-type characters in general. So no he is not "losing it" and becoming excited for fighting and increasing his strength through training like others here, that was not my intention.

What I am trying to convey however is that his new power, as conveyed through narration in the first 2 pages of this chapter and page 22, is giving him a sense of longing to figure out where it comes from. This is indeed the premise of the first few chapters of the story. So he smiles here as if to say "Now can finally have an answer to this question once I visit Whis." Furthermore, he has not ever been to Beerus' Planet, so he is a bit excited to go there for the first time. 1 Replie(s)

è semplicemente felice di trovare una direzione nella sua piccola ricerca 1 Replie(s)

Desafortunadamente no hay música en los cómics XD 1 Replie(s)

he didn't say distinctly different in general function, he says "some ways". so it is to say that generally there's a big similarity but there are key differences or missing features. 1 Replie(s)

Adicionaremos esse também, não se preocupe.

Si realmente quieres saberlo, me inspiré cuando alguien publicó ese panel original del manga de Piccolo levantándose como una predicción en broma de lo que sucedería a continuación en el discordia inglés/francés de dbm. Nunca revisé los sitios en español.

entonces se ve que varias personas pueden hacer el mismo chiste xd 1 Replie(s)

i didnt actually name this but you can call this the 'Orange Zone Explosion'!

Ah well if it's consistency I can understand. But i will make up an excuse. This is art, everything is intentional. If we want our new addition to stand out so that people notice then we make it stand out. Thus there isn't anything objectively at issue here. Sure if every odd panel was done by such person and even panel done by another it would look really stupid, but this is not the case. This is a replacement drawing that rarely ever happens, so lets make it special by slightly mimicing Asura's style instead of Gogeta Jrs, which you must admit is old and outdated by main chapter DBM's current standards.

And to note, the recoome drawing was literally traced off the one in the original version done by Faya (we only made a new one since we did not have the black and white version of those pages on the main comic. we only had older ones made by gogeta jr. that were scrapped by Salagir himself in favor of Faya's version). I only sacrificed some minor detail and I didn't try to implement my style at all, I didn't want it to stand out. I didn't even remember that I drew him there so I had to zoom in and flip between the original and the colored DBM version back and forth several times (because it's traced, tracing is boring). So it's a technical issue, we did not want to "fix" the drawing here, only to restore it so that it can be colored in this style. And you must have a really bright eye to catch something so slight, it's really not obvious.

Glad you notice! There is also Shaggy behind him!! And some others...!





Ok, but you mention its poorly drawn? Seriously? I mean I drew the extra page on page 34 and I think it kinda sucks, but this small one here? It's perfectly adequate, I even think its more detailed than most of the faces on this page. It really seems you are overreacting about how phipsil's inclusion disturbs you that you think the drawing somehow stands out as a sore thumb when really it doesn't. 1 Replie(s)

Je n'ai utilisé aucune référence pour la pose elle-même. pour cela, je n'ai regardé que des feuilles d'anatomie pour solidifier la pose, mais sinon, c'est de l'imagination comme avec la plupart des choses. 1 Replie(s)

J'ai déjà envoyé un message à Salagir donc ça devrait être réparé bientôt. mais je suppose que vous devez lire l'anglais pour l'instant alors, quelle horreur !

in realtà non ho letto one piece, quindi se c'è una somiglianza qui non sarei in grado di capire 1 Replie(s)

Le deuxième chapitre commence ! Bien que cela commence avec Gohan, Jiren apparaîtra plus tard, donc je ne vous ai pas totalement embobiné avec la couverture.

Je n'ai pas grand-chose d'autre à dire pour l'instant... alors profitez-en pendant que je travaille sur le chapitre 3 :)

The second chapter begins! While it starts off with Gohan, Jiren will appear later on so I didn't totally bamboozle you with the cover.

I don't have much else to say for now... so enjoy, while I work on chapter 3 :) 1 Replie(s)

Why is he saying 'phlegm attack', isnt phlegm that stuff in your nose? he just scratched his butt, shouldn't it be poop smell attack or fart attack?

I check french version and the google translate makes it into 'fart ball', thats much more fitting. 1 Replie(s)

mm, je ne considère pas vraiment le manga dbs avant l'arc moro pour cette histoire puisque je ne l'ai pas lu. Je me suis concentré uniquement sur l'anime pour cela, mais de toute façon, je réécris également partiellement le personnage de Jiren pour cette histoire ...

...mais oui, bien sûr, il peut voler (ils devraient ajouter des emotes dans la section des commentaires !)

Ciao questa è l'ultima pagina di questo capitolo! Ora questo fumetto farà una piccola pausa per circa 2 settimane, direi, e poi tornerà con il capitolo 2.

Bonjour, c'est la dernière page de ce chapitre ! Maintenant, cette bande dessinée fera une petite pause pendant environ 2 semaines, je dirais, puis elle reviendra avec le chapitre 2. 1 Replie(s)

Hello this is the last page of this chapter! Now this comic will go on a small break for about 2 weeks I would say, and then it will returns with chapter 2.

There is none. In fact, DBS Broly and Kale from Universe 6 are not even referred to as legendary beings/super saiyans in name, at least as of now. They are only, as far as canon DBS is concerned, saiyan mutants with extraordinary power. So Broly being a definitive legendary being in this comic is something of an addition. 1 Replie(s)

1. Yes it has its own story. And there is no relation with DBM if you were thinking there would be.

2. I dont quite understand, why would there be a panel limit? This story goes as far as I want to.

Salut, nous parlons du Broly du film DBS: Broly, le nouveau :)

Et pour information, cette bande dessinée n'a aucun rapport avec DBM et est totalement incompatible avec son histoire. C'est ma propre histoire et elle est simplement hébergée sur ce site parce qu'ils ont la gentillesse de me le permettre.

I picture that the angels are like the elves in lord of the rings; they are more divine beings so they look more pretty than others. 1 Replie(s)

Quand je lis la plupart des bandes dessinées, j'ai l'impression qu'elles vont trop vite, alors c'est peut-être pour ça.

i disegni sono davvero incoerenti nei primi capitoli perché sto ancora cercando di trovare uno stile.




no sono solo io. nessun altro artista è elencato perché in effetti è l'unico. 1 Replie(s)

Glad you enjoy! It will be quite a long ride for this comic, I hope I can keep drawing for it for a while. And I still need to finish pretty much 40% of Chapter 2 so there might be a longer break once this chapter is over, a few weeks maybe? I'll try to do as much as possible though.

Siamo principalmente coloristi, non disegnatori. E per quelli tra noi che disegnano, abbiamo i nostri progetti. So che Kobun ha il suo fumetto e io con Blancoverse. Rogeru è anche un uomo impegnato.

La seule chose sur laquelle j'ai eu des commentaires est Yoda, l'artiste de cette page (et probablement d'autres membres de l'équipe également) a mis en œuvre toutes les références sous forme d'oeufs de Pâques pour le plaisir du lecteur.

Donc rien de personnel de moi-même n'est révélé ! ;)

I pick Yoda as my avatar here, but I'm not an old person! far from it! Probably the youngest in this whole group haha! 1 Replie(s)

Heureusement, il n'y a pas encore de traduction en espagnol, mais peut-être que plus tard, ce sera assez déroutant!

Une page colorée ! Je prévois d'en faire au moins 1 par chapitre donc ce n'est pas si spécial ici. Ici c'est pour le showcase de 'Gohan Blanco' (en effet ce n'est pas Beastverse !). Cela dit je ne suis toujours pas sûr pour les yeux, le violet semblait bien ici mais je voulais à l'origine du bleu clair (bien que ce soit trop similaire au SSB ?). De plus, la tenue changera plus tard, il ne portera pas tout le temps les vêtements de Goku



À l'intérieur de l'univers, il y aura sûrement une explication quelconque. À l'extérieur, bien qu'il soit certainement ennuyeux de dessiner, la raison principale est qu'il est plus proche du design original de Gohan Blanco (personnage de fan en ligne, avant la création de Gohan Beast). 1 Replie(s)

A colored page! I plan to do at least 1 per chapter so it's not so special here. Here it's for the showcase of 'Gohan Blanco' (indeed this is not Beastverse!). I am still unsure about the eyes though, purple seemed good here but I originally wanted light blue (although will it be too similar to SSB?). Also, the outfit will change later on, he won't be wearing Goku's clothes all the time.

You can imagine what type of organization that wants a planet. A space kingdom that wants new territory. A mega-corporation who wants resources of a planet without having to deal with the inhabitants. Refugees who just want a new home. Space real estate investors. Anyone who wants a planet, this thing can have quite a value. 1 Replie(s)

Un piccolo fatto divertente: il modulo non è mai stato nominato all'interno del film stesso. Quindi ovviamente devo nominarlo ora!

E per aggiungere a ciò, prima che Gohan Beast venisse rilasciato nei videogiochi, l'unica fonte ufficiale del nome della sua forma era attraverso una dichiarazione ufficiale di Toriyama che è uscita qualche tempo dopo il film. Prima di allora, alcune persone si riferivano a questo modulo come "Final Gohan" sulla base di informazioni trapelate dagli storyboard che in effetti lo chiamavano Final Gohan. Quindi la mia piccola teoria della cospirazione è che Toriyama non ha deciso il nome del modulo fino a dopo l'uscita del film, quindi è senza nome nel film e chiamato erroneamente negli storyboard.

Un petit fait amusant : la forme n'a jamais été nommée dans le film lui-même. Donc, évidemment, je dois le nommer maintenant!

Et pour ajouter à cela, avant la sortie de Gohan Beast dans les jeux vidéo, la seule source officielle du nom de sa forme était une déclaration officielle de Toriyama publiée quelque temps après le film. Avant cela, certaines personnes appelaient ce formulaire "Final Gohan" sur la base d'informations divulguées à partir de storyboards qui l'appelaient en effet Final Gohan. Ma petite théorie du complot est que Toriyama n'a décidé du nom du formulaire qu'après la sortie du film, il est donc sans nom dans le film et incorrectement nommé dans les storyboards.

A small fun fact: The form was never named within the movie itself. So obviously I need to name it now!

And to add to that, prior to Gohan Beast being released in video games the only official source of the name of his form was through an official statement by Toriyama that came out sometime after the movie. Before that, some people referred to this form as "Final Gohan" based on leaked information from storyboards which indeed called it Final Gohan. So small conspiracy theory of mine is that Toriyama did not decide on the name of the form until after the movie was released, hence it being unnamed in the movie and incorrectly named in the storyboards.

The schedule on those other days is filled with releases for the other comics on this site, so I suggested it be on the same day as DBM with just 1 exception on Monday

Goku e Vegeta sono mortali ma hanno imparato a percepire e usare il ki divino, così come Freezer. Dovrebbe essere possibile per gli altri, come Piccolo, almeno sentirlo. e in effetti penso che in realtà dovrebbe avere un tempo più facile per imparare a farlo dato che ha alcuni dei ricordi di Kami.

He does give some feedback and advice for each chapter. I make changes if I agree with him, but it's usually very small things. Otherwise, the direction of the comic is indeed all from me. 1 Replie(s)

Penso che le caselle di testo lo facciano sembrare più grande di quello che è, ma sono d'accordo con te.

Penso anche che le orecchie nell'ultimo pannello siano troppo grandi lì.

Oh, je vois qu'il ne l'a pas changé dans le manga original ! (je n'ai jamais tout lu)

mais dans l'anime de db et dbz et les deux versions de dbs, toutes les versions que je connais beaucoup mieux et toutes regardées/lues pour la préparation de cette bande dessinée, il a 5 doigts. Dans le film qui saute juste après, il a aussi 5 doigts. Et techniquement, puisque dbs est en quelque sorte créé par Toriyama, il l'a changé en 5. Je pense donc que ce choix est tout à fait justifié.

(Traduit)

Je sais qu'à l'origine, Piccolo avait 4 doigts dans le manga Dragon Ball, mais à un moment donné, Toriyama l'a changé en 5 doigts. Je m'en tiens à ce changement et je ne le reviens pas.

Mais si vous voulez signaler une erreur : la couleur des yeux de Piccolo, elle devrait être noire et non blanche !... Mais la page est déjà publiée, et pour une raison quelconque, j'ai l'impression que les pupilles blanches transmettent une meilleure émotion pour Piccolo, donc même à l'avenir pages, vous continuerez à voir cela. (Peut-être a-t-il absorbé les yeux rouges d'Orange dans sa forme de base après une semaine d'entraînement ?) 1 Replie(s)

So that nobody can understand it. It's all gibberish anyway, if anyone is wondering.

In universe-wise, uh, maybe he is flexing his knowledge of ancient languages which he learned because he is a really a smart dude!

I wish I could see more of these drafts! they have a great energy to them 1 Replie(s)

Glad you enjoy the work so far. You should also be happy to know that I’ll pretty much exclusively use the english comment section (, sorry to other languages but I’ll still answer any questions i can reasonable answer though,) for any bonuses and informations related to the comic. Any additional stuff could probably be found on my social media pages, but comments take a priority since as you point out its the most obvious place for people to find things.

Hello agains! So this small mental training is over if it is not obvious by this flash of 'normal clothes piccolo.' It is 10 pages in total counting from the first big punch in page 6 here, I thought anything more than 10 would be too much for a simple training battle. Now we move on to scenes that don't have much action...

But first I give to you: A bonus! So I admit this fight was actually drawing practice for myself, alongside being a primer for how the action will maybe look like in the future. I didn't thoroughly plan it in my script for this chapter, it pretty much only says that Piccolo fights Cell Max in his mind which has a dark and flash-lit background. As such I went through a couple of scrapped choreography plans and I thought I would share some at the end. While I liked these sketches, I scrapped some of them partially because I thought they didn't have enough "impact" for this scene (maybe you agree or disagree :)?)

Cell Max emerges from the smoke! Piccolo is able to see but doesn't have time to react! I thought this wasn't so good because if he sees it, he should be able to react in some way. Otherwise, it would be disrespectful to Piccolo.


Here I thought it's both unclear what Cell Max is doing (I was trying to illustrate his spot beam attack but brighter and more powerful, if you watched the movie you may remember...) and it makes the battle seem overwhelmingly in Cell Max's favor. I wanted instead the fight to end with an abrupt inconclusive finish rather than a total defeat on Piccolo's part. So he ends on a block in the finished version and can still continue fighting if he hadn't lost concentration. 1 Replie(s)

We are not talking about that, but I say maybe someday. and thanks :)

Yes, Cell Max is done and over, we will only see him in the memories and imaginations in this comic. I don't want to retell the Superhero movie so much.

I like this reasoning, don't want Uub to be trapped for too long.

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Quello che stai vedendo è un allenamento per immagini, non un riepilogo o un flashback. Il riepilogo è durato solo da pagina 1-3 (dopo la copertina!).

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Personalmente, sento che lo scarafaggio era già al suo "massimo" potere possibile. Solo che il suo cervello non ha ancora finito di svilupparsi.

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En fait, j'ai lu tous les commentaires de toutes les langues pour ma bande dessinée en utilisant la fonction de traduction de Google. A quoi sert de publier une oeuvre si ce n'est de voir la réponse :) ? Mais oui discord est le meilleur pour communiquer avec moi puisque je réponds moins souvent dans les commentaires.

En outre! J'en profite pour dire ceci : Puisque c'est la première BD du site à ne pas être faite par un français, c'est la première à avoir besoin d'une vraie traduction française. Maintenant, dans les premières pages, il n'y a pas beaucoup de texte mais nous verrons pas mal de texte plus tard. Salagir fait toute la traduction jusqu'à présent, mais il ne veut pas être le seul. Donc quiconque veut devenir traducteur pour cette BD, vous pouvez approcher Salagir par n'importe quel moyen pour le contacter (la discorde peut fonctionner je trouve). 1 Replie(s)

Yes, this is image training. Not a flashback. 1 Replie(s)

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Sono d'accordo con te, ma è per il mio bene. Inizia con 3 pagine così ho il tempo di disegnare il secondo capitolo e quindi non c'è una pausa troppo lunga nel mezzo.

Potresti quindi dire, beh, potresti ritardare l'uscita fino al completamento del secondo capitolo. Ma... sono troppo ansioso di vedere le opinioni sul primo capitolo, pagina per pagina per giunta, quindi posso prenderle in considerazione per migliorare i prossimi capitoli. 2 Replie(s)

No, not at all. I am totally a one-man operation, and although I do get some feedback for my work from a few people they are very minor. I just spent a year more or less independently studying Kakumei's art to learn more about drawing. Although I stopped referencing his work by now, I think my style will always be similar to his. 1 Replie(s)

Hello! I read some of the comments, thanks for the kind words :)

Now I should probably say this sooner rather than later: This comic is a sort of a retcon sequel to DBS. I change some smaller or bigger details from DBS history to suit my direction for this story. So for example here, Goku wearing his End of Z gear in this page, and the fact that Goku and Vegeta actually notice what happened back on Earth is a change from the DBS: Superhero movie. This is a small example, but there will be a few other changes as well directly stated or implied, so you can expect that in the future. The general plot history remains the same though, think of it like how the DBS anime and manga have some differing details but lead to the same outcomes.

Also, I noticed a lot of people are confused about the nature of this comic. "What is this comic about?", well I put it simply: It is to tell the story of 'Gohan Blanco'. I may have more to say, but I want to wait until this chapter is closer to being finished in publication first.

Ok! that is all :) I hope you can enjoy this comic I'm making. It is the first I have made for public release and I'm still learning as I go. 1 Replie(s)

You should've done this in animation/video format. Music to text doesn't really work, especially you even put the background vocals alongside the main vocals (we can only read one text at a time XD).

Yeah, I think this series needs someone to proofread the grammar overall. Also since no one mentioned it here, the font could also change into something more "comic-friendly".

Yeah Trunks should be writing it

I recognize a DBS frame used for the 3rd panel Vegeta expression.

Why is Vegetto so happy all of a sudden, he must enjoyed this fight then? 3 Replie(s)

Wait so Cell just vanishes if his nucleus is destroyed?? I was expecting Vegeta to final-flash him at the end. Also when ever did Vegeta use a "dirty-trick" to win? As in actually bamboozling an opponent? 1 Replie(s)